Unclosed Ending

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Description

“Tell me, what happened to us? Where have I gone wrong? What did I do or didn’t do for you to leave me like this?”

“I’m sorry. It’s not you, it’s me.”

“Then, tell me! We can fix this. Please, don’t do this.”

“We’re over.”


They were the perfect couple. Everyone envied their relationship. All of a sudden, their relationship came to an end. Not only everyone around them was surprised about the sudden breakup but she was, too.

What actually happened for a love so beautiful like theirs to come to an end? No one knows… or maybe she was the only one who didn't know...

Foreword

Word count: 8260

Beta-reader: sootemup


Notes:

I didn't realise this story would be this long. If only I knew, I would have broken it to 3-5 chapters.

Disappointing story. Read at your own risk.

Don't expect a lot from this oneshot. This is a confusing one.

This is a story where people will be able to relate; the ones who went through the same situation as the characters in this story.

If you haven't been in the same situation before, that would probably be the reason why you might find this a confusing story.

PS: I WILL NOT BE DOING A SEQUEL.

djeniryuu
[14/6/27] Have pity on me guys. I can't probably write a sequel as long as the 1st chap ever again. Lol

Comments

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maiquie24 #1
I’m just gonna wallow in sadness but this story still gets to me even for the 3rd time reading this
Hihihihijijo_143 #2
Chapter 1: Aishhhhhhh but that was good hehe
nazihah88
#3
Chapter 1: I don't get it why would Luhan leave her then reject it later on?
SuChanMin
#4
Chapter 1: this is exactly like what my ex did to me.
man, im so glad I bookmarked this story (when he broke up with me) years ago, I just read this now because I was too busy sulking about my brokenheart back then. anyway, I love it! (my ex used the "I can multitask" line on me too, and same goes with the tweets. I stopped stalking him now tho) hahahaha ill be checking out your other stories
baeknhyu
#5
Chapter 1: love this story. but damn it you're not doing a sequel)-:
shairasoo #6
Chapter 1: tbh author-nim I'm so confused like why would Luhan do that... I know the title is Unclosed Ending but why??? If he got bored of her then why did he tweet that? so confused rn and its annoying >< but it was a good story
pinkyluv_ #7
lol ... this is what just happened to me . . . he wanted to broke with me cuz he's get bored with me . . .but , author-nim .. my ex is not Luhan :3