THE TWIN BOYS

The Secret
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In front of her, it was an old apartment. Maki just stared at it from up to down. She gulped nervously. This is her choice after all. Why did she felt hesitate now. Her heart beats irregularly. Her palms sweated damply.

 

“Yosh!! You can do it Maki” murmured Maki quietly. She entered the old apartment and looked around. Something amazed her. Although the apartment was old, but it was taken care nicely. The compound was clean and there was even a small garden in that place. Somehow, she felt very calm and comfortable looking around her. Suddenly she heard something.

 

“Ne...matte Da-chan!” screamed a boy. Maki immediately shifted her gaze to a boy who just ran to the apartment’s compound. The boy was grinning while putting his arms up. Her stomach churned when she looked at the boy.

 

“I win!”he shouted and danced while singing. A smile started to form on Maki’s face. Kawaii..she said to herself. Then another boy came into the sight. Maki shocked seeing the other one who was really looked alike.

 

“Ne..Da-chan, it is not fair that you run first.” Said the other boy who wear a red shirt. His face was all gloomy while pouting his mouth.

 

“Well..it is a fair competition. You are the one who ran slow, Kei- chan.” Said the other one. Kei-chan became even gloomier. Noticing his younger brother’s sadness, Da- Chan patted his brother head.

 

“Jaa.....how about we have anot

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UsagiGirl11
#1
Chapter 66: Hanmie!! I had to read this AGAIN for like the don't know how many times but Thanks so much for writing this!! I really enjoyed it again.
fayers #2
agree with paigefiqah, glad you didn't take badly to those harsh reviews! and really would like to tell you despite all the grammar mistakes and such, I thoroughly enjoyed the story!!!!!:)
chickalicious
#3
glad you didn't feel so bad about those harsh but nice review. (: every reviewer has their own point of view in reading stories. i salute you girl! ^^

grammar errors or not, i still love this story. (:
cnblovegirl #4
Best story I have read on this website, EVER !!!
Before it was the Witch, although its not finished yet ... But WAIT... I just foud out you wrote that to XD. I love you !
Such good stories :3 i was meant to revise but this story was too good. I couldnt stop reading. Just everything ! This story .. The angst >< so good. I could go on on and on about how great this story is including all the characters XD but it will take ages.
Just than you for this story... Thank You !!!
*goes off to check if the witch is updated*
P.S if you ever need a Beta to go over the chapters and fix any mistakes, It'll be my pleasure :D
I think its established that im your fan ..
Haha k bye. See you when i comment on the witch (once its done)
namwustar #5
huaaaaaaaah ottokhe.... *please bear w/ my spazz this time*
OKAY SO HERE IT IS....
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!! *second japanese stories that I read today* and... its your fic XD *throws confetti everywhere*
at first i was really confused who is the father of the baby, LOL
im sorry.... not a fast thinker XD
I love how your writing style, its so well written and easy to understand
and... ofcourse you do really write a long chapter..
since I love to read a completed stories, this story of yours are so cool!!!!!! like REALLY cool!
I love how at the end... yamaki is back together :"""")))
so proud... so happy... they're just so cute together *proud shippers*
and ofcourse with toma/meisa too <3 gosh they're cute...
but actually.. i dont really know who is this ikuta toma and meisa..
wait... i just knew yamapi, maki, jang geun seuk *well ofcourse*, and jin.
i might start searching about the other because of this story kekeke

at last... do write more of yamaki story.
wait, you haven't finished The Witch right? well just finish it first then XDDDD
good luck ^____________________________^
_ninx_ #6
waaaah....finished reading this amazing fic yesterday...<br />
This story is AWESOME!!!!<br />
i was not really a fan of japanese actors and actresses...<br />
however, through this fic i learned more about them and become curios..hehe.. <br />
'thank you so much for writing this wonderful fic...
hanzxxx #7
how i wish this can be a real drama..u've make maki cuteness as a pregnant woman n yamapi tears feel so real.huhu :( huaaaaaa........... :')
SHEfan #8
WOW OMG that is soooo DAMN GOOD!!!! RESPECT!!!GOOD WORK!! Hope you continue in future!! NOW iam going to read your next FANFIC or your new updates from it!!! It is alos very very good like very much !! :)
MountainTree
#9
LOOOOOOONG CHAPTER INDEED! <br />
no complaints here! XD <br />
this was so awesome mehn! :))<br />
kyaaaa Tomeisa's turn now hahaha!<br />
<br />
just imagining Haruki makes me squeal!<br />
such a cute cute baby!<br />
Pi and Maki should really start making one as in right now! hahaha!<br />
and I love the romantic scenes!<br />
ahahahaha!<br />
especially Tomo getting jealous with Haruki! XD<br />
what a funny man!<br />
AND ANOTHER BABY! yatta!<br />
Thank you for this amazing fic! <3