CHAPTER 11- THE MAN WHO KEEP SEARCHING

The Secret
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                He had been standing in front a house for almost thirty minutes. But still, the courage that he had been hoping to be inside him did not come. He sighed of dissapointment at his cowardness. His palm never stop sweating and his heart beats faster than usual. Why on the earth he had to feel nervous like this. Sho looked up on the house again and started to walk. When he reached the door of the house, hesitation came one more time. His knuckle turned white when he wanted to knock the door.Come on Sho. What makes you so scared. It just Maki’s parents, no one else.Muttered Sho. His hand shaken because of his nervousness. Aaahhhh..... he shouted in his heart as he unknuckled his hand . His body shivered at the thought of facing Maki’s father. The past came in front of his eyes when he was spending his time with Maki.

 

“My father?” asked Maki short when they had a dinner together at the restaurant. Sho just nodded his head while chewing on his meal. Maki smiled to him.

 

“Why do you want to know about him?” asked Maki, eyeing Sho suspiciouly. He gulped the food that he had nervously.

 

“It just...ummmmm......I wanted to know....aaa...the person who..who had a daughter like...like you.”  Sho stuttered as he said the it. Damn! She is getting on his nerves. Why she had to look at him that way. Maki laughed when seeing Sho squirming uncomfortably under her gaze. Even stuttering.

 

“ My father is a hardworking man.” Said Maki after some times. Her hand put the chopstick on her bowl. Her smile never leave her face as she told the story.

 

“Hardworking man?” Maki just nodded the Sho’s words.Then she continued.

 

“Well, he always busy with his work. But he never failed to bring all of us out during weekend. He is the man who priotize the work but at the same time able to divide his time wisely fo his family.” Added Maki. Sho noted something in his brain.

 

“ One thing that I really admire him is his principal.For him, it doesn’t mat

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UsagiGirl11
#1
Chapter 66: Hanmie!! I had to read this AGAIN for like the don't know how many times but Thanks so much for writing this!! I really enjoyed it again.
fayers #2
agree with paigefiqah, glad you didn't take badly to those harsh reviews! and really would like to tell you despite all the grammar mistakes and such, I thoroughly enjoyed the story!!!!!:)
chickalicious
#3
glad you didn't feel so bad about those harsh but nice review. (: every reviewer has their own point of view in reading stories. i salute you girl! ^^

grammar errors or not, i still love this story. (:
cnblovegirl #4
Best story I have read on this website, EVER !!!
Before it was the Witch, although its not finished yet ... But WAIT... I just foud out you wrote that to XD. I love you !
Such good stories :3 i was meant to revise but this story was too good. I couldnt stop reading. Just everything ! This story .. The angst >< so good. I could go on on and on about how great this story is including all the characters XD but it will take ages.
Just than you for this story... Thank You !!!
*goes off to check if the witch is updated*
P.S if you ever need a Beta to go over the chapters and fix any mistakes, It'll be my pleasure :D
I think its established that im your fan ..
Haha k bye. See you when i comment on the witch (once its done)
namwustar #5
huaaaaaaaah ottokhe.... *please bear w/ my spazz this time*
OKAY SO HERE IT IS....
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!! *second japanese stories that I read today* and... its your fic XD *throws confetti everywhere*
at first i was really confused who is the father of the baby, LOL
im sorry.... not a fast thinker XD
I love how your writing style, its so well written and easy to understand
and... ofcourse you do really write a long chapter..
since I love to read a completed stories, this story of yours are so cool!!!!!! like REALLY cool!
I love how at the end... yamaki is back together :"""")))
so proud... so happy... they're just so cute together *proud shippers*
and ofcourse with toma/meisa too <3 gosh they're cute...
but actually.. i dont really know who is this ikuta toma and meisa..
wait... i just knew yamapi, maki, jang geun seuk *well ofcourse*, and jin.
i might start searching about the other because of this story kekeke

at last... do write more of yamaki story.
wait, you haven't finished The Witch right? well just finish it first then XDDDD
good luck ^____________________________^
_ninx_ #6
waaaah....finished reading this amazing fic yesterday...<br />
This story is AWESOME!!!!<br />
i was not really a fan of japanese actors and actresses...<br />
however, through this fic i learned more about them and become curios..hehe.. <br />
'thank you so much for writing this wonderful fic...
hanzxxx #7
how i wish this can be a real drama..u've make maki cuteness as a pregnant woman n yamapi tears feel so real.huhu :( huaaaaaa........... :')
SHEfan #8
WOW OMG that is soooo DAMN GOOD!!!! RESPECT!!!GOOD WORK!! Hope you continue in future!! NOW iam going to read your next FANFIC or your new updates from it!!! It is alos very very good like very much !! :)
MountainTree
#9
LOOOOOOONG CHAPTER INDEED! <br />
no complaints here! XD <br />
this was so awesome mehn! :))<br />
kyaaaa Tomeisa's turn now hahaha!<br />
<br />
just imagining Haruki makes me squeal!<br />
such a cute cute baby!<br />
Pi and Maki should really start making one as in right now! hahaha!<br />
and I love the romantic scenes!<br />
ahahahaha!<br />
especially Tomo getting jealous with Haruki! XD<br />
what a funny man!<br />
AND ANOTHER BABY! yatta!<br />
Thank you for this amazing fic! <3