Title: Don't blame me if I love you
Author:  achungg_maniacs
URL: winglin.net/fanfic/achungg_maniacs
Reviewer: 2pmvietguh @ SooHyun's Art
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Before you read this review, just letting you know, I'm being honest. Not that I hate oyu or anything, just being honest, ok?-

Title: 5/5
Really like this title, goes along with your story.


Poster/Background: 5/10

The background, I don't get it. The poster, could've been more eye-catching. A poster that a reader will 100% want to read the fan fic. A poster can actually get an individual to read your fan fic, etc. Sorry, not trying to be harsh, just giving my honest review.

Forewords: 6.5/10

I think that you could have made a better foreword. The foreword was too short, even though it was straight to the point.  What about the characters?- I dont understand what you mean by "YOU" having a same background with Key. A little more explaination would've been better.- "You have to face your faith", I guess you've meant fate (destiny, etc.)

Plot: 12/15

I didn't really like the plot at first, seemed a little bland for me. Yet towards the middle of the story, it really got interesting. Favorite part was obviously the endings. I love happy endings, and your fan fic ended in happiness.


Creativity/Originality: 11/15

It's not fully original. Typical story, girl has some kind of illness. I guess the only difference is that she survives her illness.


Speed/Flow: 7/10

Story flows pretty well.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 4/10

You've had plenty of grammar errors and vocab: one of the examples are: "
This man is the most sweet in the group." (It should be the sweetest) I pretty much gave up correcting/highlighting your grammar mistakes in the 10th chapter.


Characterisation: 8/10

I really like Donghae's character at first. Then I learned to like Key's character.


Writing Style: 8/10

Other than grammar errors, your writing style is great-

Overall enjoyment: 5/5

There were some scenes/parts that were emotional to me. I cried like nonstop. There were also parts which brings a smile to my face while reading.

Sub Total: /100

Bonus:5/5

There's WooYoung included in your story, even though he wasn't in it alot, but still, love him.

Total: 76.5/100