the crazy and the insane

kukunoona

Title : [5/5]

 The title already attention grabbing. 
 

Foreword/ Description : [14.5/15]

 Non roller coaster foreword/description. The reader wouldn’t need to read twice to understand on what you want to express. But it would be best if you

Plotline : [18.5/20]

 The plotline is simple and direct. Suitable for one short story.
 

Flow Of The Story : [19/20]

 Perfect. The way you write by making sure that reader would understand because it really difficult to relay the feeling in one shot story. Sometime the reader would leave hanging in the end of the story.
 

Character Development : [14.5/15]

 For me, I don’t know at all who is Taeyong or Seulgi or wendy or Jaehyun. But you write it enough for the reader like me to know about them.
 

Grammar & Spelling : [15/15]

 I don’t know if I overlooked the spelling error or any grammar mistake. From what I read it nearly perfect.

Overall Enjoyment : [10/10]

 It’s worth to take a peek and read. Do you want to read something fresh, crazy and fun? This story had it all.

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