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I'm Not Her.

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You sat in your room, blankly staring at the wall.

*Leave...here? This house? Aunt? JunHong? School? B.A.P oppas? DaeHyun oppa...?*

Fresh tears sprang to your eyes at the thought of leaving DaeHyun.

Burying your face in your knees, you let out a loud sob, wailing at the unfairness of it all.

You felt warmth wrap around you and a soothing voice whispering, "It's okay. It's okay."

Looking up, you saw DaeHyun who gave you a wry smile, "Aigoo you crybaby."

Your lips warbled, "DaeHyun oppa-"

He opened his arms, you buried your head in his chest and cried.

He soothingly pat your back, waiting for you to calm down.

You coughed," D-DaeHyun oppa-"

"Sh..I...know.."

Tears fell down your cheeks.

He gave you a sad smile, "We're gonna get through it. Together. No way am I leaving you. No way am I letting you go without a fight."

DaeHyun wiped your tears, "Don't cry anymore, okay?"

You nodded, wiping your tears away.

He whispered, "You should sleep. Your eyes are gonna puff up tomorrow."

You gave him a small smile and nodded, "You'll stay..right?"

He nodded, "I'll be right next to you."

Your heavy eyelids fell closed, soon you were peacefully asleep.

A worried look fell onto DaeHyun's face, "What am I supposed to do without you?"

He brushed your bangs and kissed your forehead.

Not a moment too soon later, you began to whimper as tears fell down from your eyes.

DaeHyun's eyes widened in alarm, "_________-ah."

You whispered, "No no no no, I don't want to leave. Don't let me go."

DaeHyun's heart broke, he pressed his lips onto yours, you dreamt that DaeHyun was kissing you.

You calmed down because in your dreams DaeHyun whispered, "I'm never letting you go."

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!