Meeting.

I'm Not Her.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3smylZ4u0K8&feature=relmfu

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"Hyungs!"

Waving to a group of boys, he ran up to them, "Meet my cousin noona, ___________!"

You bowed meekly, "Ahnyeonghaseyo."

"No need for formalities."

A scary looking boy smiled at you, "I'm YongGuk. Junior in college."

You smiled, "I'm _______..well you knew that already. I'm going to be a junior in..high school."

Another boy pouted, "Darn it. I thought you were our age. You're too young to date!"

"I wouldn't let noona date you anyway HimChan hyung. You're a ."

HimChan protested, "AM NOT!"

You laughed but slowly walked away from him.

"Hi I'm JongUp! I'm going to be a junior in high school too!"

"YoungJae. Senior."

You beamed at both of them, "Nice to meet you."

They swooned at your smile.

"Let's see..we're waiting for one more person."

Zelo looked around, "Where IS DaeHyun hyung?"

"Here."

You turned around to see a boy who had a poker face on.

He boredly surveyed everyone until he laid eyes on you, *YeRin?*

You whispered to Zelo, "Does he usually stare at people he doesn't know?"

"YeRin?"

Everyone froze, especially YongGuk.

You looked at them, "Who is..YeRin?"

DaeHyun approached you, "Is it really you?"

Zelo stepped through, "Um no. That's my cousin. _________."

DaeHyun stared at you with his mouth wide open, "But...you have to be her...there's no way...you're not..."

You gave him a strange, confused look, "Um..no. I'm _______. Nice to meet you?"

HimChan cleared his throat, "So...what should we eat for dinner?"

YongGuk emphasized your name, "How about we let ________ pick? She is the new addition to our family."

*Family..?*

Your eyes became blank, he turned to you, "Of course. I hope you don't mind.."

A warm smile spread on your lips, "No no of course not."

YoungJae grinned, "Then it's settled. Let's go eat now!"

JongUp smiled at you and you nodded, "Let's go.."

YongGuk beamed at you, "It's nice being called oppa instead of hyung all the time!"

DaeHyun was silent in thought, *But she has to be YeRin. She looks just like her.*

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!