Bipolar.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ndQaoV3-iHM&feature=fvwrel

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DaeHyun walked you home.

On his way to his house, he stopped to think of you and YeRin.

He hit the wall in frustration, *You're an idiot.*

His fist and knuckles were bruised and bleeding.

Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AYw7eJYadco

Also at that moment, it had begun to rain.

Tears escaped his eyes, *I'm sorry YeRin...even in the heavens I made you cry..*

The moment you were safe and sound in your room, it began to rain.

You jumped in alarm, *I wonder if DaeHyun oppa is okay...*

Texting him: I hope you're safe at home and not in the rain! Good night~

You sat down and waited for his reply.

Tired of waiting, you went to wash up and finish your homework.

When you came out, the first thing you did was check your phone.

No reply.

Frowning, *Maybe he's sleeping...*

Your thoughts wandered off to the two of yours' kiss and when he kissed you.

A lovestruck smile was on you face.

Zelo knocked on your door, "Noona do you want ice cream- whoa. What's with the creepy smile?"

You glared at him, "It's NOT a creepy smile!"

He snorted, "Yeah it is."

"Is not!"

"It is."

"Grr. Get out JunHong-ah!"

"Naww bro..."

You threw a pillow at him, Zelo pouted, "Fine! No ice cream for youuuu~"

You ran out of your room.

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Walking to school the next day, you stopped to think, *Wait what does the kiss make me and DaeHyun oppa? Do I like him..? Love him? Does he like...me?*

With the detemination to figure it out, you let the day pass by until you had music class.

You greeted DaeHyun with a warm smile only to have it shattered as he glared at you coldly and shunned you away.

 

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!