Fight.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aROYzazi8uM

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You walked into the school with dark circles under your eyes.

All night you couldn't fall asleep because of you confusion between JunHyung and DaeHyun.

Zelo watched you, worry evident in his eyes.

*Just what exactly happened..?*

You sat through your classes, being scolded several times for not paying attention.

In music class, the teacher announced, "Students I hope you're projects are coming along nicely!"

You and DaeHyun both thought, *We didn't even start yet..*

When the bell rang, you silently got up and left the room.

YoungJae gave you a small smile, "Hey you."

You smiled a bit, "Hi YoungJae oppa."

Then you silently passed by him.

"Poor kid.."

Meanwhile, DaeHyun was going insane because he desperately wanted to talk to you about JunHyung.

Of how much he wanted you to say no.

But his pride wouldn't let him, if anything, he wanted you to talk to him first.

When the last bell rang, you received a phone call but someone snatched it from you.

Your head snapped up, "What-?"

DaeHyun's face was dark, immediately your expession turned blank.

He looked at your phone to see that indeed, JunHyung was calling.

You stared at your phone in his hands and calmly said, "Give it back."

"No."

You glared at him, "Just give it back."

He stepped up to you, "Make me."

You looked down and simply walked away.

DaeHyun's jaw dropped in shock, *She's not doing anything..?*

He grabbed your arm and slammed you against the wall, trapping you with his arms on each side.

You said, "What are you doing..?"

"This."

He bent down and kissed you.

You froze in shock before pushing him away and slapping him, hard.

DaeHyun stared at you.

You had tears in your eyes, "What the hell? Do you think this is some kind of a joke? Are you gonna kiss me and then treat me like yesterday's trash again?! No. No. No."

"_________-ah-"

"No. Just stay away from me."

You began to walk away when he yelled, "Are you gonna say yes to him?!"

You stopped.

He spun you around, "Tell me. Are you gonna say yes to him?"

The look you gave him sent chills down his spine, "I wasn't sure before but now I am."

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!