Promise.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WshI9j9a_8Q

~

The two entered a famous chinese food store.

Ordering noodles and rice and all sorts of food, the two dug in and shared tidbits of conversation.

That was until, "Hyung..do you really like noona?"

DaeHyun sipped his water and paused.

"...do you? Because..if you don't..I really don't want her to get hurt-"

"I do."

Zelo almost choked.

DaeHyun nodded, "I REALLY like _________, scratch that. I...love her. I love _________. Don't worry Zelo."

Zelo sighed in relief, "It's just because...I don't want noona to get hurt again."

DaeHyun asked, "Again?"

"Noona moved to my house and my school because...well partially because of her parents."

DaeHyun stared at him, "Why do I get the feeling you're not telling me the whole story?"

Zelo fidgeted in his seat, "Noona..had a boyfriend...who was horrible to her."

Zelo's fists clenched at the thought, "Girls at her school thought she was lying and that she was a ...when that wasn't true. That's where B2ST comes in...I still don't really like them because they think they're better than us...but they protected noona, one of them fell for her. ________ noona told her parents but they didn't pay attention to her, when she told them she was transferring schools and moving out, they were more than happy to let her leave."

DaeHyun was silent, stunned, *How is she so happy after all of this?*

"I know you're nothing like her ex-boyfriend..but promise me...you won't hurt _________ noona hyung."

"I promise. You don't even have to worry. I promise Zelo."

*At least I hope.*

Zelo smiled, "Thanks hyung. Oh and for the food too."

DaeHyun rolled his eyes, "Shut up you moron."

Zelo grinned, "Hehe. I won't tell noona about the whole apron incident."

DaeHyun glared at him, "You do and you can expect to pay for the food with bruises on your face."

Pouting, "You're so mean to me hyung."

" it up."

DaeHyun paid and the two walked out, DaeHyun slung an arm over Zelo's shoulder and ruffled his hair, "Choi JunHong when did you grow up this much?"

"I'm a man!"

DaeHyun laughed and shook his head.

Zelo whined, "I ammmm! I'm going to be 16 soon!"

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!