Moving In.

I'm Not Her.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_34uDv7_CrM

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You carried your boxes into your new home, even though your parents tried to make you use the butler.

*It's not like you pay attention to anything else..*

You sighed and rang the doorbell.

"I GOT IT!"

The door burst open, "Noona!"

"Hi JunHong-ah."

You greeted as he immediately ran out to take the rest of your stuff in.

"Sorry it's not as huge as aunt and uncle's mansion."

He teased making you roll your eyes, "You know I'd much rather live here than there anyday."

"Is that my favorite niece I hear?"

"Hi auntie."

You smiled as you placed the box on the floor and hugged her.

"Oh you get prettier every time I see you~" 

"I saw you two days ago!" 

You exclaimed while she pinched your cheek.

She led you upstairs and said, "Your room is right next to JunHongie's, I hope you like it!"

She opened the door to your brand new room.

"I love it, thank you so much."

You beamed as she kissed your cheek, "JunHong argued with me over what color we should paint the walls. Looks like he was right."

"Haha indeed he was."

You sat down on your brand new bed and smoothed out the covers.

"Incoming!"

Zelo burst through your door carrying the boxes.

He dropped them on the floor and gave you his signature grin, "Hey noona when you're done unpacking, you wanna go meet my friends?"

"Sure..but are you sure they'd want to meet me? I'm older.."

He smirked, "My friends are older too."

You blinked in surprise, "Haha arasso, get out so I can unpack."

He gave you a sly look, "Afraid I'll see your ducky boxers?"

Your face turned red as you threw a pillow at him, "JERK! YOU'RE THE ONE THAT GOT ME THOSE!"

Cackling, Zelo ran out, "Be ready by 8 okay?!"

You laughed and shook your head.

Then you opened your closet, put clothes in, and organized your room.

Around 7, your aunt called, "What do you guys want for dinner?"

"UMMA I'M TAKING NOONA OUT! MAKE FOOD FOR YOURSELF!" 

You peeked out the door, "Don't I have a say?"

Zelo shook his head, "Nope."

"Mwoh?"

"I'm king of the house! Bow down to me! Mwahah!" 

You gave him a look as you grabbed a pillow and threw it at him, "YAH! NOONA THIS IS WAR!"

The two of you threw stuffed animals and pillows at each other, but stopped when the two of you grew tired.

You laid down next to him on his bed, "You're like the little brother I've always wanted."

"I want to be an oppa though.."

You pushed his head and got up, "I'm gonna go change. Bye."

"Why? What you have on is fine!"

You looked down at your sweatpants and baggy t-shirt and gave him a look.

He shrugged and said, "You have...15 minutes. GO GO GO!"

The two of you got ready, "WE'LL BE BACK!"

"Have fun~ don't come home too late. JunHong." 

Zelo deadpanned, "How come you don't say anything about _________ noona?"

His mom hummed as if she didn't hear him.

He pouted, "Psh. Whatever. GAHJAH!"

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!