Ruin.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JnJ38EBOSxY

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The next day, whispers filled the halls of a 'new girl', another one that looked like YeRin.

"I wonder if DaeHyun oppa is going to leave _________ for her.."

All throughout the day, you heard one rumor after another but never got a clear story.

Also, you hadn't seen DaeHyun all day.

*Is he sick..?*

Worry gnawed at your heart, biting your lip, a frown came upon your face.

Taking your phone out to text DaeHyun, a voice asked, "Are you cheating on me?"

Looking up, you saw DaeHyun with a raised eyebrow.

"N-no! I was worried! I thought you didn't come to school because you were sick!"

He chuckled and pinched your cheek, "If I was sick I wouldn't tell you babo."

You frowned, "See. That's a problem-"

DaeHyun cut you off with a peck on your lips.

You blushed.

"Gahjah."

Holding your hand, the two of you walked into class.

The teacher announced, "Alright class. We have a new student."

In came in a girl who looked very much like you except paler and with much darker hair.

She bowed, "Ahnyeonghaseyo. My name is YeRi, nice to meet you."

YoungJae frowned, *The hell. The rumors were true? Then the hell is she in this class? YeRin couldn't sing, neither can this chick.*

The teacher nodded and the class murmered in apprehension.

"Maybe you'd like to show us your...skills?"

YeRi's smile faltered, "Oh sorry. I have a sore throat. I can't."

Nodding, "Alright go take a seat."

YeRi's eyes gleamed, "Can I have her seat?"

She pointed directly at you, all eyes falling to where you sat, you pointed at yourself, "Me?"

She nodded.

DaeHyun frowned and began to open his mouth when YoungJae said, "She can have my seat. I'll just chill in the back."

The teacher nodded and motioned for YeRi to sit in YoungJae's seat.

Pouting, she obliged and sat down.

YoungJae sat in the desk next to DaeHyun, the two met eyes.

*What the hell is going on?*

The bell rang as students filed out of the classroom and into the hallway.

You and DaeHyun were walking when JongUp came running, "Hyung hyung did you hear-"

YoungJae nodded, once.

JongUp gulped, "Umm..."

YeRi was standing in the middle of the hallway, "DaeHyun oppa!"

DaeHyun growled.

You gave him a concerned look and murmered, "I'll see you later DaeHyun oppa."

With that, you kissed him on the cheek and walked to your class.

YeRi's eyes flashed when she saw you place your lips on DaeHyun's cheek.

*Don't worry Lee _________. You won't last for long. Not with what I'm about to do.*

DaeHyun turned around and stormed off, YoungJae gave her a steely look and JongUp ignored her and walked by.

*Why did she have to come and ruin everything?*

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!