Ba-Bump.

I'm Not Her.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t7hnBlr_X3A&feature=fvwrel

~

The next day, you got to a rough start, having stayed up all night to finish a project.

On top of that, you had a pop quiz, an essay project due, and it just wasn't your day.

Tired and feeling horrible, you headed to the rooftop, only to find that everyone else had plans.

Pouting, you sat down.

*Maybe I could enjoy peace and quiet...*

You heard shuffling of steps and saw DaeHyun come up.

*Or stress.*

He gave you a curious look.

"They had plans."

He rolled his eyes as if to say, 'I knew that.'

You frowned, "Oh sorry. Do you want to be alone?"

DaeHyun didn't say anything.

You let out an exasperated sigh, "Alright. Got it."

Standing up to leave, you slung your backpack over your shoulder and carried your lunch.

*No wait that's not what I want.*

DaeHyun grabbed your wrist, your body lurched back as you dropped your lunch and met eyes with him.

His eyes were huge, *Oh no.*

You stared at the ground where the food had spilled and tumbled out.

*You have GOT to be kidding me.*

You snatched your wrist from him and turned away so he couldn't see the fresh tears coming from your eyes.

DaeHyun had an apologetic look plastered on his face, a mix of shock in there as well.

Your voice warbled, "Sorry."

His eyes widened, *Is she..crying?*

He grabbed your wrist again, you turned around and flared, "What is your problem? What is with you and GRABBING my wrist? IS CALLING MY NAME NOT ENOUGH FOR YOU?"

He gaped at you.

Instantly, you felt ashamed, "Sorry. I didn't mean to yell, it's just. Um."

You sighed, "Bad day. Sorry. I'll leave, I won't bother you any longer."

Turning around, you headed to the exit.

Lurching forward to grab your wrist, DaeHyun caught himself and practically choked out, "_________."

You paused, *Did he seriously...?*

Again, "Stay."

"Are you sure?"

"....yeah."

DaeHyun took out his lunch and gave it to you.

You blinked at him curiously.

"S-sorry."

His face turned red, *Idiot?*

He sat down and stared at the ground below him.

You stared at him, and then the lunch.

Opening it, your mouth watered at the kimbap.

But you felt bad taking it from him.

You tapped his shoulder and held a kimbap out, he raised an eyebrow and gave you a look.

You blushed, "You don't have to let me feed you..you can just eat it..you know?"

Tilting your head, you smiled at him.

DaeHyun's cheeks flared and tinted with pink at your smile.

*Ba-bump.*

He could feel his heart beating.

Turning away, "It's okay."

But then his stomach growled.

His ears turned red as well as his face.

You giggled softly, "Here, I won't look."

He snatched it and shoved it in his mouth.

You beamed and leaned on the wall behind you, "Gomawo DaeHyun oppa."

He glanced at you and smiled a tiny bit, *You're welcome.*

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!