Waking Up.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QIIMhhRgQ2I

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The next day, you woke up due to your body being shaken awake.

*Am I late for school?*

You groggily got up and looked around.

Zelo was grinning at you.

You groaned, "What Choi JunHong?"

"Nothing."

"Then why'd you wake me..?"

"Just thought you might wanna know..your first date with DaeHyun hyung is in...30 minutes."

It didn't register in your mind until a few moments later.

"...WHAT?"

Scrambling to get out of bed and to pull off the covers, you ran into the bedroom screaming, "I HATE YOU JUNHONG-AH!"

Zelo cackled and went into your closet to pick out an outfit for you.

You took a shower in 10 minutes, pouting as you came out.

Zelo smiled and held out the outfit, "Hurry noona~ 20 more minutes!"

Kicking him out of the room, you hurriedly changed and towel dried your hair, growing impatient and using the hair dryer.

That took another 10 minutes, you dug through the room for a purse to match, keys, lip gloss, and any other essentials you might need.

The doorbell rang, Zelo opened the door and greeted DaeHyun, "Is _________ ready?"

"Nope. She woke up 30 minutes ago!"

"NO I'M READY-"

You tripped and almost hit your face on the floor if it weren't for the fact that DaeHyun had caught you again.

"..you're really fast hyung."

You nodded in agreement, blushing.

DaeHyun adoringly smiled at you, "You look prettier today."

Zelo pretended to gag and pointed towards the door, "Leave this place. RIGHT NOW."

You giggled and waved, "Be good."

"Will do."

DaeHyun slipped his hand into yours and led you outside.

He turned to you, "Did you eat?"

"Uh.."

At that moment your stomach grumbled and your face flamed.

*So cute.*

"Let's go eat first then."

You nodded, face still red.

DaeHyun chuckled and squeezed your hand.

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!