Who?

I'm Not Her.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P93loT1XJ1k

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Throughout the night, you got to know B.A.P except for one person, DaeHyun.

He kept his distance from you and stared at you as if you weren't there.

You waved goodbye to your new friends, exchanged numbers and walked home with Zelo.

"JunHong-ah?"

He stopped whistling and turned to you, "Eung noona?"

You bit your lip, "Who is YeRin?"

Zelo frowned slightly, "Is this because of DaeHyun hyung?"

You paused, "I'd be lying if I said i wasn't..."

He smiled at you, "Don't worry about it noona! It's nothing!"

"Are you sure?"

"Positive."

*It doesn't seem like nothing...*

Noticing that you were deep in thought, Zelo piped up, "Noona, I'll race you to the front gate! Loser gets to use the bathroom last tomorrow!"

*Huh?*

Realization hit you, "MWOH? NO-"

You scrambled after him, while he cackled, "Slowpoke slowpoke~"

You frowned and ran past him.

His jaw dropped.

You were sitting on the front steps, smiling and waving while he was panting for breath.

"Looks like someone needs to exercise more~"

He pouted, "No fair."

Giggling, you held your hand out, "Let's go slowpoke. Auntie will be worried."

He took your hand and the two of you pulled each other inside the house.

Meanwhile, DaeHyun couldn't get you out of his head, *_________.... YeRin. But her name is ________.*

Rolling his eyes in frustration, he blew a raspberry and laid down on his bed.

He looked at the picture by his bedside, "You would be starting senior year with me too..."

With that, he closed his eyes, rolled to his side and fell asleep.

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!