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I'm Not Her.

 

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"Now...last but not least, the fountain!"

YoungJae held his hands out to a pool of water with a lit up colored floor.

You blinked at it, "What's so special about it?"

JongUp grinned, "Wait for it..."

Zelo and YongGuk glanced at each other.

"WELCOME TO B.A.P  __________!"

B.A.P chanted as they pushed you onto the floor that lit up and spout colored water.

You shrieked, "I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!"

Cackling, the boys popped party poppers and cheered, you pulled Zelo to the water where it directly hit on him.

He winked at HimChan, "Come on hyung give me a huuuuuug~"

"NO YOU LITTLE BRAT!"

JongUp and YoungJae dragged DaeHyun to the water.

He scowled but loosened up, a small smile on his lips.

Whooping and cheering, the seven of you had a fun water fight.

After having enough of the water, you sat down on the warm floor and let the warm air dry your clothes.

"See we even have cake!"

You laughed as you saw the green tea cream cake, you cut it into equal proportions and dug in with everyone else.

"Thanks for an amazing day oppas."

They grinned and ruffled your hair, "No problem."

You sneezed, and blinked rapidly.

Someone tossed a hoodie at your face, "Oof."

You took it off your head and saw that DaeHyun was the only one in a t-shirt, you beamed, "Thank you DaeHyun oppa."

He turned away from you but you could see that his face had a tiny smile on it.

"It's getting late. We should go now."

After dropping YoungJae and JongUp off, you and Zelo got dropped off, "Bye! Thank you for today!"

Zelo waved, "Bye hyungs!"

YongGuk nodded, "Good to know you had fun, come talk to us if you need anything."

You beamed and nodded, "Will do, thank you YongGuk oppa."

HimChan smiled, "Bye pretty dongsaeng, oh OW WHAT?"

He rolled his eyes, "DaeHyun says to give him his hoodie back on monday."

You smiled, "Okay I WILL DaeHyun oppa."

You waved cutely, "Good night~ Drive safely!"

Zelo said, "You can shower first noona."

"Arasso, gomawo."

You took warm pajamas and entered the bathroom, you folded DaeHyun's hoodie neatly, *I should put this in the washing machine tomorrow.*

Seeing a lump in the hoodie, you curiously reached into the pocket and pulled out something.

A note was attached to it: Stupid.

A warm smile spread across your lips, "Thank you DaeHyun oppa."

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!