You're Mine.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t0iUapOtfkA

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After music class, YoungJae ran out, "WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?"

DaeHyun had his poker face on, he held yours and his intertwined hands, "What does it look like?"

You blushed and tried to make him let go.

"Oppa..let go.."

He looked at you, "No."

You frowned, "Let go."

"No."

"Let. Go."

"No."

"LET GO!"

"NO."

Zelo cut the hands, "Coming through~"

DaeHyun glared at Zelo.

Zelo grinned and shrugged, "Gah jah noona, leave DaeHyun hyung to brood by himself."

You beamed and nodded and linked arms with him.

YoungJae gave DaeHyun a flirtatious wink, "You still have me-"

DaeHyun wordlessly walked away, YoungJae pouted and followed after you two.

After school, you were waiting by the gates, kicking your feet in the dirt.

Blowing a raspberry, *Where's Choi JunHong this kid?*

Suddenly, someone grabbed your hand and began running, full speed.

"Whoa-wait! I'm waiting for someone-"

But the person still ran full speed ahead.

 "LET GO!"

Abruptly halting, the person turned around and faced you, "No. You're mine."

Your face turned bright red.

DaeHyun smiled at you and playfully swung yours and his hands.

HimChan saw you two from afar and yelled, "HEY LOVEBIRDS! WE'RE GONNA GO EAT! LET'S GO!"

DaeHyun frowned, "I don't wanna."

You rolled your eyes and pulled him along.

Zelo smiled at the new couple, but on the inside, *If you hurt my noona, I kill you.*

"JunHong-ah..your smile is kinda creepy..."

JongUp nodded, "It really is. Like he's plotting someone's death.."

Everyone stared at DaeHyun.

YoungJae ruffled Zelo's hair but on the inside, *Don't mess up Jung DaeHyun.*

*I hope you're not looking at _________ as a replacement YeRin.*

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!