Warning.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4QDYug6wUV0&feature=related

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After school, you buttoned your coat and waited outside for DaeHyun.

"Lee __________."

You turned around to meet eyes with the new girl from today.

"Yes?"

She gave you a smile but you knew it wasn't genuine.

"Can we talk for a few moments?"

Slowly nodding, "Sure."

She smirked, "I'll cut to the chase. Break up with DaeHyun oppa."

Your eyebrows furrowed, "Excuse me?"

Her eyes became hard and cold, "I said. Break up with Jung DaeHyun. Are you stupid? Do you not understand me?"

You blinked rapidly, "No."

Her eyes narrowed, "No?"

She stepped close to you hissed, "Listen you ignorant little . DaeHyun oppa isn't meant to be yours. Nor was he meant to be with YeRin. He's supposed to be with me. If you knew what's good for you...and DaeHyun I suggest you do as I say before I strip everything from you, one by one. Believe me, I'll make sure I get DaeHyun. I always have it my way."

You took a deep breath, looked at her straight in the eye and said, "No."

"Still no?"

Frowning, "DaeHyun oppa has the right to be with whoever he wants. If he breaks up with me, then I'll let him go. His happiness means a lot to me, more than mine. Go ahead and take everything. But unless DaeHyun oppa himself breaks up with me and goes to you, I'm going to fight for him. I'm not letting go. He's a human being, he's a person, he has the rights and mind to choose and decide for his own life. Without you interfering in it. I don't know exactly who you are to him but...threatening me like this isn't going to do much. Sorry."

You turned to walk away when YeRi grabbed your wrist and hissed in your ear, "You know the story of DaeHyun oppa's girlfriend?"

You stayed still and nodded.

"I can make that happen...to you or...to DaeHyun oppa."

Your eyes widened, *DaeHyun oppa...?*

"If I can't have him..no one can."

Satisfied, she smirked and walked away.

"I'll protect him. Try. I'll protect Jung DaeHyun with everything I have."

A displeased look came upon YeRi's face, *We'll see how long that lasts.*

She walked away.

DaeHyun saw YeRi walk away from you, he ran over and took your face in his hands, "Gwenchana?! Did she do something to you? Did she say anything to you?"

You looked up into his widened, concered and worried eyes and smiled, "No."

Sighing in relief, "Arasso. Let's go home. Sorry for making you wait so long."

You shook your head, "It's okay. You can just make it up to me."

He teasingly raised an eyebrow, "Oh really?"

Nodding cutely, "Mhmm."

His voice dropped low, "How would I do that?"

"Close your eyes."

He gave you a strange look but did as told and slightly puckered his lips.

"Stay still!"

Giggling, you snapped a picture of him.

You silently walked several steps ahead of him, making sure he wouldn't be able to catch up to you anytime soon.

Yelling, "OPEN YOUR EYES!"

His eyes snapped open and he looked around, you began running for your life.

"Yah!"

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!