Happy Christmas.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DOIroIsBhSQ

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The two of you entered the cafe that was decorated festively for the Christmas season.

Sitting down, DaeHyun ordered warm drinks and yummy baked goods.

He turned to you and held his hand out, "Present."

Blinking, "I don't have one."

His mouth dropped, "Mwoh?! Seriously?!"

You shook your head and giggled, "Of course I have one silly."

He blew a raspberry and huffed, "Is it fun teasing me?"

"...yes."

"No present for you!"

You nodded, "Okay."

DaeHyun pouted, "You're no fun."

Handing him a nicely wrapped and pretty big box, "Merry Christmas DaeHyun oppa."

He paused and took the box, "Gomawo."

Tearing the wrapping paper gently, he opened the box to see three smaller boxes inside.

He opened the first one to see a watch.

"These are at least a $100..."

You shook your head, "I had enough saved up, I promise."

DaeHyun had a glum expression on his face, "Now I don't wanna open your other gifts.."

You laughed and urged him to open his presents.

He opened the next box to see a photo album/scrapbook.

You blushed, "I know we haven't been dating for too long...but we could fill it up as we...go?"

DaeHyun chuckled as he saw the various pictures from dates, before he liked her, with B.A.P, etc.

Nodding, "I like this gift more."

You made a face at him and turned bright red when he opened the last gift, which was a coupon book.

Carefully leafing through each page, DaeHyun's smile grew wider and wider.

You buried your face in your hands, cheeks heating up.

"_________-ah."

You peeked between your fingers, DaeHyun had already torn a coupon out: Kiss Me Whenever I Want.

"You do know..it's one time use right?"

DaeHyun nodded.

"You want me to kiss you..in here?"

He nodded again and waited with closed eyes.

You pouted but inched closer to him when suddenly he lurched forward and there was a 'snap'.

Blinking, you saw a polaroid picture coming out of the two of you kissing.

DaeHyun handed the camera to you,"Here's gift number one..sorry I didn't wrap it."

Your cheeks were puffed up, "Oppa...this is...too..expensive.."

DaeHyun gave you a look, "That's what I said about the watch."

Blowing a raspberry, "Fine fine."

He pinched your cheek, "That's my girl."

DaeHyun took out a necklace, "I know this is really cheesy but I actually have a purpose for this."

He went over to your side and clasped the necklace on you.

"This is my promise to you, later on, much later...I'll give you the key to that heart, because you're the key to mine."

He tenderly smiled at you and murmured, "It's also blackmail..if you want to see what's inside, you're gonna have to stay with me..forever."

You whispered, "I wouldn't mind."

DaeHyun tilted your chin and gently kissed you.

You gently the necklace and gave DaeHyun a soft smile, "It's really pretty oppa...thank you."

"I'm glad you like it."

You leaned on his shoulder and looked at the Christmas night life outside together.

*Merry Christmas DaeHyun oppa.*

*Merry Christmas ________-ah.*

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!