Dirty Deed.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aHoSd_RMnPM

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"Okay students! A friendly reminder that you must hand in your midterm projects very very soon! I will pick the best ones and show them to the class. Remember the requirements are that you compose a song, record it. Turn it in to me. Very simple."

You smiled, it was your turn to record in the school's studio today.

Having been excused from the rest of your classes, you entered the studio and bowed to the teacher.

"Well if it isn't the best voice of the school!"

You blushed and shook your head.

He chuckled, "Alright, let's see what you got."

Putting on the earphones, you began to sing.

"And you're doing this song with...Jung DaeHyun?"

You nodded, "Yes sir."

He laughed, "Never have I heard such a good blend of voices before. But this is odd..there was a student who had a VERY similar melody that came in today to record too."

You frowned, "Really?"

He nodded, "Yes but I'm sure it was just a coincidence don't worry too much."

You smiled and nodded, "Okay."

The recording process continued.

Later on, DaeHyun came.

The teacher smiled, "You're very popular."

DaeHyun titled his head, "Huh?"

He shook his head, "Let's get on to recording."

Suddenly, his phone rang, "Oh you get started. I'll set it up."

DaeHyun nodded, he had never heard the song you wrote, he only knew the lines he wrote.

Meanwhile, the lights had flickered off outside and someone had switched the recording for a different track.

*There Lee __________. I'll take your voice first.*

After DaeHyun was done, he went outside to see you.

He tapped your shoulder and looked the other way.

You blinked at him, "How was recording?"

DaeHyun smiled, "It was good. Too bad they wouldn't let me hear your part of the song."

You laughed and put a finger to your lips, "It's a surprise silly."

"Psh. I'd rather not wait."

"Patience is a virtue DaeHyun oppa."

He rolled his eyes, "Yeah yeah yeah. Let's go see the other guys, they always complain how they never get to see you anymore."

You nodded, "I miss the oppas too! Let's go!"

DaeHyun paused, "On second thought..."

You slapped his shoulder and walked ahead.

He whined and chased after you.

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!