Surprise.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VvwF_QCjS8Q

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The doors of the auditorium flung open, but there was no one in sight.

DaeHyun frowned, *Is YeRi back..?*

"Happy birthday to you~ Happy birthday to you~ Happy birthday dear ________! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!"

B.A.P walked in holding a strawberry cheesecake with candles lit up.

Your eyes shined, "Oppas..."

Zelo grinned, "Make a wish noona!"

You closed your eyes, *Please let us be happy like this forever.*

Then you blew out the candles.

You had your eyes closed until you felt something wet on your cheek.

Eyes snapping open, you thought Zelo had smeared frosting on your cheek.

You saw the "frosting" that had kissed your cheek.

Squealing, "OHMYGOSH."

The boys chuckled at your reaction.

"You're so cute! Aw..hi baby~"

The little puppy pawed at your leg, whimpering to be carried.

Immediately picking him up, you cooed, "Hi cutie. What's his name?"

HimChan laughed, "Well originally we were gonna call him DaeHyun. But..."

JongUp mumbled, "We thought DaeHyun hyung would get mad.."

DaeHyun growled, "Yes I would. AND I AM MAD BECAUSE YOU GUYS INTERRUPTED-"

YoungJae rolled his eyes, "Yeah yeah says the boyfriend who forgot the girlfriend's birthday."

DaeHyun protested, "I DID NOT FORGET! I HAVE HER PRESENT RIGHT HERE-"

YongGuk teased, "Be nice children."

DaeHyun pouted.

Zelo grinned, "YoungJae hyung and I thought of the PERFECT name. 'Toki' (Bunny/rabbit in Korean)"

You looked at the puppy, "Toki?"

YongGuk smirked, "Or you can call him Hyunnie."

HimChan snorted, "Yeah since that Hyunnie over there won't let you call him that."

You thoughtfully mulled it over, "I think I'll call him..."

B.A.P held their breaths.

"Hyuntoki."

JongUp paused, "...why didn't we think of that..?"

Zelo groaned, "Great now no one wins the bet."

DaeHyun rolled his eyes, "Can I spend quality time with my girlfriend now?"

YoungJae smirked, "Yep of course..first.."

He handed you a slice of your birthday cake.

Then the other boys smashed DaeHyun's face in the cake.

DaeHyun froze while you stared with your mouth open and 'Hyuntoki' barked.

DaeHyun wiped the cake off his face and threatened, "Run."

Scrambling for their lives, the boys ran out of the auditorium.

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!