Flare.

I'm Not Her.

 

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vlGWOw7movQ

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Girls and boys split up into teams to play volleyball.

You inwardly groaned, *I can't play sports for life.*

Still, you tried your best and tried not to duck whenever the ball came within 3 feet from you.

That was until, the ball hit your head really hard.

You fell to the floor, dizzy and disoriented.

"NOONA!"

"___________!"

DaeHyun's heart clenched, *She's not YeRin. She's NOT YeRin.*

Even though he told himself that, he stormed over to your side and picked you up.

You gasped in shock, "No no I'm okay."

He gave you a look and you instantly shut up.

"Who is she to him?"

"Why is he so overprotective of her?"

Zelo went over, "Hyung I got it from here."

DaeHyun opened his mouth to protest, Zelo frowned, "She's not YeRin hyung."

With that, DaeHyun dropped you, hard, on the floor.

You blinked in dizziness.

Zelo's eyes widened, he bent down and with the help of JongUp, he carried you on his back to the nurse's office.

Placing you on the bed, the nurse clucked her tongue and brought some ice out, you curiously blinked at her, "It's not that bad, I'm fine, I promise!"

She rolled her eyes, "Honey. You're head has a giant, red bump that's swelling up."

"Oh."

Zelo sheepishly grinned, "At least it means you get to miss class?"

JongUp added, "...that was the last class."

Zelo laughed, "I'll go get your stuff noona. Just rest here until the bell rings okay?"

"Eung.."

You closed your eyes but your mind kept on wandering to when DaeHyun carried you, even if it was only for a few moments.

Shaking your head furiously, *Get your mind out of the gutter Lee _________!*

The bell rang, Zelo came in with your stuff, "Leggo."

You bowed to the nurse, "Thank you!"

She smiled and waved, you exited the room and followed Zelo.

"Should I carry you?"

You shook your head, "I'm okay. Thanks though, JunHong-ah."

"ZELO!"

You saw a van where HimChan was waving from the passenger seat.

YongGuk stuck his head from the driver's seat, "_________! HI!"

You waved, "Go."

He looked at you, "Are you sure? Come with me!"

"No...I want to go home."

Zelo gave you a look before waving and entering the car.

You waved to the boys before heading home.

Opening your bag to reorganize your schoolbooks and such, you saw a lollipop with a note attatched to it: Feel Better.

You smiled, unwrapping the treat and popping it into your mouth.

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!