Unexpected.

I'm Not Her.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=endscreen&NR=1&v=qgTQitniBBI

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DaeHyun was frozen in place outside the door.

When the two of you met eyes, his face turned red and he ran offf again.

Your jaw dropped to the floor, "W-wait!"

DaeHyun cursed mentally, *Aish. WHY'd you do that Jung DaeHyun?! She only LOOKS like YeRin! She's NOT YeRin!*

He hid himself and stopped when his conscious whispered, *Then why does your heart beat for _________?*

His feet became rooted to the floor when you called his name.

DaeHyun faced you and gulped.

You caught your breath and frowned at him.

"That was...unexpected."

He didn't meet your eyes.

"That was..also my first kiss."

*I..was her first kiss?*

For some reason, that made him extremely happy.

"Wipe that smile off your face Jung DaeHyun."

His head snapped up at you, your arms were crossed and you were frowning.

He echoed you, "Jung DaeHyun?"

"Yeah. Jung DaeHyun."

Stepping up to you, he trapped you with his arms and murmered, "Do you think it's wise to call your oppa that?"

Gulping, "W-what? N-no get away from me you kiss stealer-"

He was close enough so that you were looking intently into your eyes.

Holding your breath, you stared back.

"Shut up."

Then he kissed you again, this time, you kissed him back.

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!