One Step, Two Steps Back.

I'm Not Her.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mKtKOQTh5nk

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On monday, after classes finished, you went to your locker and got your textbooks for homework.

Unwrapping a lollipop, you stuck it in your mouth and happily walked away.

Spotting DaeHyun, you cautiously approached him, "DaeHyun-sshi..."

He turned to you and raised an eyebrow, *She calls everyone oppa but me sshi?*

You held up a bag with his clean hoodie.

He wordlessly snatched it from you.

You blew a raspberry, "I was gonna say thank you but never mind."

He turned around and stared at you.

You shrugged, but brightened, "Oh! But thank you for the bunny doll. How did you know I was trying to win it at the claw machine?"

DaeHyun didn't answer.

"Okay...bye DaeHyun-sshi."

You lurched backwards when he grabbed your wrist.

"It's DaeHyun OPPA."

A small smile spread on your lips, "So you're saying I can call you oppa?"

He blinked at you.

You rolled your eyes, "Okay..well..I'm gonna go."

He grabbed your wrist again, "WHAT?"

He jumped in surprise, not expecting you to blow up on him at all.

You felt remorse, "Sorry! But..you didn't have to grab my wrist.."

~Flashback~

"OW WHAT?"

YeRin frowned at a much more cheerful and talkative DaeHyun.

"Nothing~"

She rolled her eyes, "You're SO weird Jung DaeHyun."

He smirked, "But that's what you love about me."

She snorted, "Mhmm. Yeah. OKAY."

He raised an eyebrow, "Mwoh? Come here you-"

Laughing, he ruffled her hair.

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You waved a hand in front of his face, "Hello? DaeHyun oppa?"

*I can't do this when I still love YeRin. YeRin is the only one for me.*

He turned around and walked away.

You twirled your hair, "What was that about?"

Your phone rang, "Hello? Oh..alright JunHong-ah, I'M GOING RELAX."

With that, you went outside the school to go eat crepes with your lovely cousin.

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BTSsaranghaex3 #1
Author-nim Can i get ur permission to make ur fanfic into a interactive game on this chinese website? Thanks. Plz reply a.s.a.p!~
parkjihoonsgirl #2
Read it for the second time and loving it even more now ♥
BabyYen #3
Chapter 74: Nice story! :))
jun97min #4
Chapter 3: so excited to read this!!! I always read comments first lol
-2Mirae-
14 streak #5
Chapter 74: Her ex mom is a b***h
I'm so happy there's a sequel ^^
shapphire
#6
Is this angst, Author-nim? 73 chapters and sequel?? You're daebakk!! XD
SharonTheImaginator #7
Chapter 74: Woah okay! I'm gonna start by saying how adorable this story was. I loved that everything fell into place nicely in the ending! I just loved that the character development of Daehyun, how it very much contrasted from what he was before and how sweet he's gotten ever since he started dating the main character! Oh and one main thing, I just LOVE that you didn't give a specific name to the girl so every single fangirl is able to be her! (Applause for the author ;))
Although, I thought the chapters were a bit undetailed, it lacked some background story. There should've been more inside opinions from each characters. Don't get me wrong I appreciate that you're making it from a third person's point of view, but I think the main character herself didn't really have a distinct personality that reminds readers of her even if they're not reading the fanfic at the moment, do you get what I mean?
I thought there should've been more emotion and descriptions espcially when the story got into it's wonderful :) (when she left for america). It would've been better if you wrote more about what they each got through without each other. So overall it lacked some back story and details especially the rest of the bap members (i couldnt help but feel theyre a bit useless without some personalities being described)
I hope that my comment can help you become an even better author! I love this story! I can tell why so many people enjoyed reading it!! It was funny, utterly ADORABLE and it's not too long, not too short! Hopefully this can be a constructive advice for you!! :D keep it up!!