Calling... AnneTOP
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Title[4.5/5]: Even though ain't isn't really a word and it's more like slag... I'll let it slide because your title suits your story.
Design[3/5]: Your poster was something else. I think there was a lot going on in it which made me uncomfortable and a little dizzy. It is also hard to read the sentence on your poster. I think if you chose something smaller and less curver, it would have been eligible to read. Your font didn't suit your story nor did the colors in your foreword and description.
Description & Foreword [5/10]: I have always hated descriptions of characters. They are annoying and unneeded. In your description, you didn't actually description the story. You gave no details whats-so-ever. All you did was put up character descriptions. Although you did somewhat describe your story through the characters, it made me very uninterested in your story to be honest. -2 Your foreword is alright but I would have liked if you added a small portion of your story into the foreword. That flag counter is a huge no-no. All those colors in the foreword and the desciption were also a turnoff. It made your foreword and description look untidy.-3
Plot and Characters[26/30]: Although I would have liked for you to actually reveal the characters through your story, your descriptions of them were well done. Your plot was alright, but basic. It was some what interesting and well described.
Grammar & Punctuation [14/15]: There were some minor speling mistakes, nothing too big though. Your vocabulary is alright too. I had little too no problems.
Creativity [12/15]: I haven't seen (or more like read) many TOPBom and SkyDragon stories, so it was a little creative. Your plot is a little basic though.
Flow[4/5]: Your story flow was great. There were a few things where I had to re-read the sentence because it was confusing.
Overall Enjoyment[13/15]: As I said many timesbefore, I don't really like reading stories about girls X boys.... nor will I in the near future.
Grade: 80.5%
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