Title[5/5]: Your title completely worked with your story.

Poster(s)[5/5]: Your poster is fine by my standards.

Description & Foreword [4/10]: You mixed up the description and foreword. Your description is suppose to lure the readers and possible suscribers into the story. Your description turned me away from the story. Put what you wrote for your foreword into your description. Your foreword should include a small portion of chapter one and what you wrote for your description.

Plot and Characters[29.5/30]: Wow. I've never seen a plot like that before. I took off .5 points because Yumi is mostly a common Japanese name and your story mostly includes Koreans. Creative and lovely plot~!

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Word Chose[23/25]: Your font was alittle small and annoying to read. Eveything is fine but just to be sure, go back and triple check all of your chapters.

Flow[10/10]: Perfect flow.

Overall Enjoyment[6/15]: These types of story really aren't my cups of tea. 

Grade: 82.5% 

Reviewed By: cottonSHINeecandy