Calling... kpopfan_eru

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Title[4/5]: Your title was iffy.... at least for me. I don't like it's plainness. It wasn't really eyecatching and I was reluctant to review it at first. But I can understand why you choose that title, it does suit your story plus choosing titles are so complicated. .... I liked your chapter titles, very creative +1

 

Design[5/5]: I really like how you designed your story. As for the font in your decription, I think Georgia or bold would look better ... but I don't know.... Having posters for every couple must have been hard right? But I love that idea! I was waiting for someone to finally have posters for multiple couples ><. I love how every posters for the couples have a different feel to them. Ex: Taoris has a dark and mysterious feel while KyungMyeon has a cute and calm, sweet feel to it. Good work~! I'm surprised someone could make so many posters by themselves considering how I don't even know how to edit some cat ears on a person.... fail

 

Description & Foreword [9/10]: The beginning of your description was pretty detailed, captivating, and well written expect, "Although one in their goal, their differing views and a centuries-long battle between their clans make it difficult for them to work together.That was some awkward wording right there. I had to re-read it multiple times to understand what you were trying to say. I suggest re-wording it to something along the lines of, "Although saving their world are a common goal, their differing views and century-long battles between their clans make it difficult for them to work together."  Your description was truly interesting. Your foreword is good. I loved how you even introduced how your thought up your story plot and everything. Nice.

 

Plot and Characters[27/30]: Your plot is very orginal and creative. The drama and romance add to the plot line and make it even more understandable. Even though EXO are overused in many fanfics, they mold perfectly into your plot line.

 

Grammar & Punctuation [13/15]: It is pretty good. There are some minor mistakes here and there but pretty much no problems understanding what you're trying to say. 

 

Creativity [13/15]: Your story is very creative. I've seen hundreds of thousands of EXO fanfics, but thank God that yours didn't include some inappropriate Mary-Sue girl who's personality is completely fake as heck...

 

Flow[3/5]: I think you switched in and out of the different couples a little too fast. I think if you spent at least a chapter and a half on each couple, it would have flowed more. I also think that if you elaborated more in each and every paragraph, it would have flowed better.

 

Overall Enjoyment[8/10]: (Did I enjoy your story?) I didn't really read every single chapter but I might once I have some free time. Maybe.... if I like it.... I might just suscribe~.

 

Grade: 82%

 

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Miss-Kpop
#1
In_Disguise #2
Chapter 2: Is there by any chance , *cough cough* my review will be finished after a year? XD just wondering, I'm just wondering why a sudden stop of updating?
Chullys
#3
Ummmm this is random but you spelt "subscribe" wrong on your foreword? Perhaps this was done on purpose? O_O
In_Disguise #4
Chapter 1: Hi~! Can I um.. Pass my request to Imyeoniyeomni? Please do (^-^) thank you.
psyche_delic
#5
Excuse me, I just accidentally sent up my form, I was actually planned to send it on other day .__. I'm sorry
UwinLe #6
This is kind of awkward and it might seem like I'm a stalker, but I somewhat really enjoy reading your reviews on people fics. :)
Imlucifer
#7
Chapter 2: So sorry for this, but would tell AyoWhatUpKrease I would like to cancel my request.
Can I have a different reviewer instead. Any one will do but my request will go out to cottonSHINEEcandy or vnxazn. Please tell her I'm really sorry for the switch and she is still happy enough to be subscribed to my story :)
d-tsuga
#8
I added you as affies ^^
Please link back ^^
Thanks!

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/261617
KatyMikayla
#9
Chapter 68: Hqhahha i had their ages in the forewod but people kept telling me to delete the character charts. I'll just add it in the fist chapter then :) thank you so much for the wonderful rview!!
Promi53ToB3li3v3 #10
Cool shop!:)