Calling... roughivge
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Story by roughivge
Title[3/5]:
The title wouldn't have exactly reel me in. It didn't really make sense to me. But it gave off a good feeling.
Poster(s)[3/5]:
No offense to the designer but the way it was made wasn't really done well. I don't like the font used and the poster was low quality. Sorry.
Description & Foreword [8/10]:
Your description was fine. But I didn't like the foreword. Do you have to necessarily write like this?
Plot and Characters[27/30]:
The way you decribed the characters was fine but..
I didn't get the fact that Emmaline was really blind until Luke left her there. The way you described the others was fine but I didn't really love them. I do like them though.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Word Chose[23/25]:
You write fine but I saw a few punctuation marks missing.
Flow[10/10]:
Your flow is fine.
Overall Enjoyment[13/15]:
I didn't really like it. I wouldn't have read it right away. I gave you a 2 point bonus for your writing style. I was originally going to give 11.
Grade:87/100 a.k.a B+
Reviwed by Ms.J[SuJu4minuteBeast03]
Ms.J's note: Okay, I have to admit I was a bit harsh. But you wanted an honest review. And this is a honest one. Thank you for requesting at Kimchi Dumplings! <3
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