Calling... CrystalxDoLL

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Title[4/5]:

The title is kinda confusing? What does it mean by high water? And Come Hell? or Come to Hell? or Going to Hell? or Coming to Hell? (lol)

Poster(s)[5/5]:

The poster is pretty good. Shows them all and the darkness is good.  

Description & Foreword [10/10]:

I like your description. You included character descriptions but you didnt tell us who's was who's and it made me wonder which descriptions fit the character. 

It was a good idea to say that it was rated m. And it was for violence and anger. I thought it was at first. xD

Plot and Characters[30/30]:

So far in chapter one, it's pretty good. you introduce all the characters. And you also includned info about them.

I really liked how you Sunggyu and Woohyun were kinda like oppsite. Sunggyu's dad was a fail father and Woohyun was a fail son. (Of course he isn't! :D) But it was linked. 

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Word Chose[23/25]:

Spelling: 

Sometimes there will be some typos but that's it. 

Word Choose:

It might not be to other readers; but just to me maybe? I feel like you left out some words that could make me understand better. For example:

His dad got the beastly weapon. I would say: His dad got out the beastly weapon.

You choose good words.

Flow[10/10]:

The flow is great! The ending is kinda fast though.  

Overall Enjoyment[15/15]:

I loved your story. It had great bond/friendship and love in it and it was short too! I will definity read the sequel. 

Grade: 97% a.k.a A

Reviewed by: SmileFlyy-

- Very, very, very, very, very, very, very sorry. It took me so long to review your story. I was very busy. 

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Miss-Kpop
#1
In_Disguise #2
Chapter 2: Is there by any chance , *cough cough* my review will be finished after a year? XD just wondering, I'm just wondering why a sudden stop of updating?
Chullys
#3
Ummmm this is random but you spelt "subscribe" wrong on your foreword? Perhaps this was done on purpose? O_O
In_Disguise #4
Chapter 1: Hi~! Can I um.. Pass my request to Imyeoniyeomni? Please do (^-^) thank you.
psyche_delic
#5
Excuse me, I just accidentally sent up my form, I was actually planned to send it on other day .__. I'm sorry
UwinLe #6
This is kind of awkward and it might seem like I'm a stalker, but I somewhat really enjoy reading your reviews on people fics. :)
Imlucifer
#7
Chapter 2: So sorry for this, but would tell AyoWhatUpKrease I would like to cancel my request.
Can I have a different reviewer instead. Any one will do but my request will go out to cottonSHINEEcandy or vnxazn. Please tell her I'm really sorry for the switch and she is still happy enough to be subscribed to my story :)
d-tsuga
#8
I added you as affies ^^
Please link back ^^
Thanks!

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/261617
KatyMikayla
#9
Chapter 68: Hqhahha i had their ages in the forewod but people kept telling me to delete the character charts. I'll just add it in the fist chapter then :) thank you so much for the wonderful rview!!
Promi53ToB3li3v3 #10
Cool shop!:)