Title[5/5]:  I loved your title~! It was so cute! Plus it makes sense and fits your story.

Poster(s)[5/5]:  To be honest.... Your poster looked like a movie poster. It fits your story, looks great, and makes me want to read your story. 

Description & Foreword [9/10]: There were two errors in your description: In line 2 seas should become seas' and in line 5  should become ed. I suggest you remove that little copyright thing from your description, solely because you didn't copyright it. Your foreword was great.

Plot and Characters[25/30]: Your plot, chapters, and characters were great so far. I still suggest improving all three to make it the best it can be. Remember to go back through each and every chapter carefully to check for any errors. I love your plot. I'm from the Caribbean and I love Pirates so I found your story cute even through it is mature for multiple reasons.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Word Chose[20/25]: It was fairly amazing, but you could do way better~. It was better than lots of fanfics I've seen being feautured. Remember to reread your chapters and improve your plot, grammar, word chose, spelling, punctuation, and characters to make your story more interesting.

Flow[8/10]: It was fairly good.

Overall Enjoyment[12/15]: It was alright for my standards.

Grade: 84%  

Reviewed By: cottonSHINeecandy