Title[4/5]: Eh... Your title is fine but you should capitalize the F in full and the P in people. You should also use only one question mark. Two or more just piss off readers.

Poster(s)[4/5]: It's cute. Though there are alot of things going on such has 3 boys, 2 girls, buildings, flowers, paintings and butterflies.

Description & Foreword [7/10]: Okay let's begin with your description. Instead of using:

' 17 year old, Yoo Hanbyul is supposed to be in her last year of high school at Kyeongbuk High School. But suddenly her mother dies due to an unknown cause, with her father working overseas she has no choice but to live with her annoying cousin, Yoo Hye Mi. Her father enrolled her at the School of Performing Arts, Seoul.

Plot and Characters[25/30]: From my perspective Hanbyul is kinda crazy. Which is great because she's hopefully not a Mary-Sue. I say that Hanbyul is crazy because she thought an ahjummah would be delusional, kicked a starnger because she looked scary, and crap like that. I honestly breifely skimmed through because I only read EXO/TaoXReader fanfics - ~ -. To me Hyemi doesn't seem all too annoying. It seems like she somewhat wants to be close to Hanbyul. I suggest if you want her to be annoying give her more lines, always bother people, be a y queenka, etc.  The plot hasn't really progressed very far and hope it does soon.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Word Chose[23/25]: It was okay. You could improve your vocabulary slightly. Everything else was fine. I suggest going back to see anything that I've missed. 

Flow[8/10]: It was okay. It progessed kinda fast between the first and second chapters.

Overall Enjoyment[13/15]: As I said before I usually don't really read non-EXO or non-Tao X Reader fanfics. But this was okay. It could be better. Tip: From the 2 second I saw that you put some questions up for the readers. Some readers would most likely shy away from stories like that unless they get mentioned or get karma. 

Grade: 84%  

Reviewed By: cottonSHINeecandy