Reviewer: KPopFan4Ever101

Story: My Boyfriend, Boyfriend

Title[5/5]: Seems simple enough to me. 

Design(Posters, Font Color, Font Style, and Backgrounds)[3/5]: Whoa, hang on a minute. What's with the colored font?? That threw me off completely .To me, colored font is distracting (since I have ADHD) and it'll be tough for me to actually read the dang thing. I didn't like that it was color-coated! Please take that away! P.S - Those are the only things I took points off. Your poster and font style is fine.

Description & Foreword [10/10]: Kinda reminds me of my own life: Your parents are divorced and you have no idea where your father is. Except it's the other way around...

Plot and Characters[30/30]: I don't know that band, Boyfriend, but it doesn't mean I hate them. I just don't listen to their music. It also would have been nice to put some phots in when you said their names. Since I'm not familiar with Boyfriend, giving the pictures to actually identify who is who, would be awesome :)

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Word Chose[24/25]: I'm not really that big on grammar and spelling.

Flow[10/10]: Seems fine by me.

Overall Enjoyment[14/15]: Your first chapter was a bit of a let down since it was soooo short. But the next chapter was fine. Sorry if I'm being too rude or picky. I just don't like short chapters that very much ._.

Grade: 96% Good job!! :D Thanks for requesting from me! I'm never picked to do a review at this shop...it's kind of a let down and I honestly feel like quitting...