Calling... KPopFan4Ever101

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Title[5/5]: I loved your title so much. It instantly drew me into the story.

 

Poster(s)[5/5]: It was simple and just plainly beautiful. There ksn't many things going on in the poster which is good.

 

Description & Foreword [9/10]: You made some minor mistakes such as misspelling things in Rule # 12. I think instead of using making humans into the walking ead, you should use turning or morphing. But you should use a more fitting or dramtical word.

 

Plot and Characters[25/30]:  I haven't seen many zombie fanfics that didn't include the stupid Mary-Sue girl. I loved yout plot and the characters molded perfectly into it.

 

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Word Chose[22/25]: You made some minor spelling errors that didn't disrupt the flow. I suggest going back through every single chapters to change them. Please stop using Comic Sans MS. Most people on AFF find it the worst font to use. I really do love this story and would love for it to get more suscribers, comments, and views.

 

Flow[10/10]: It was alright.

 

Overall Enjoyment[15/15]: I loved your story. Not only was it different from most of the AFF fanfics, it was a new couple that I've never read about because of all the hate they get. I'm gonna go suscribe now. Keep up the amazing work.

 

Grade: 91% 

 

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Miss-Kpop
#1
In_Disguise #2
Chapter 2: Is there by any chance , *cough cough* my review will be finished after a year? XD just wondering, I'm just wondering why a sudden stop of updating?
Chullys
#3
Ummmm this is random but you spelt "subscribe" wrong on your foreword? Perhaps this was done on purpose? O_O
In_Disguise #4
Chapter 1: Hi~! Can I um.. Pass my request to Imyeoniyeomni? Please do (^-^) thank you.
psyche_delic
#5
Excuse me, I just accidentally sent up my form, I was actually planned to send it on other day .__. I'm sorry
UwinLe #6
This is kind of awkward and it might seem like I'm a stalker, but I somewhat really enjoy reading your reviews on people fics. :)
Imlucifer
#7
Chapter 2: So sorry for this, but would tell AyoWhatUpKrease I would like to cancel my request.
Can I have a different reviewer instead. Any one will do but my request will go out to cottonSHINEEcandy or vnxazn. Please tell her I'm really sorry for the switch and she is still happy enough to be subscribed to my story :)
d-tsuga
#8
I added you as affies ^^
Please link back ^^
Thanks!

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/261617
KatyMikayla
#9
Chapter 68: Hqhahha i had their ages in the forewod but people kept telling me to delete the character charts. I'll just add it in the fist chapter then :) thank you so much for the wonderful rview!!
Promi53ToB3li3v3 #10
Cool shop!:)