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Title[5/5]: I loved your title so much. It instantly drew me into the story.
Poster(s)[5/5]: It was simple and just plainly beautiful. There ksn't many things going on in the poster which is good.
Description & Foreword [9/10]: You made some minor mistakes such as misspelling things in Rule # 12. I think instead of using making humans into the walking ead, you should use turning or morphing. But you should use a more fitting or dramtical word.
Plot and Characters[25/30]: I haven't seen many zombie fanfics that didn't include the stupid Mary-Sue girl. I loved yout plot and the characters molded perfectly into it.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Word Chose[22/25]: You made some minor spelling errors that didn't disrupt the flow. I suggest going back through every single chapters to change them. Please stop using Comic Sans MS. Most people on AFF find it the worst font to use. I really do love this story and would love for it to get more suscribers, comments, and views.
Flow[10/10]: It was alright.
Overall Enjoyment[15/15]: I loved your story. Not only was it different from most of the AFF fanfics, it was a new couple that I've never read about because of all the hate they get. I'm gonna go suscribe now. Keep up the amazing work.
Grade: 91%
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