Title[4/5]: It wasn't eyecatching but it did fit your story.

Poster(s)[2/5]: Your poster was plain. But it was kind of cute. I'd suggest either getting a new poster from a shop or adding more emotional colors to it.

Description & Foreword [4/10]: Your description doesn't tell me anything about your story except when it started. The spaces in your foreword..... good grief. I had to scroll down so much to read 5 lines. It would be way better to just make everything into one or two paragraphs. But each lines of your foreword was very interesting. But honestly your description and the format of your foreword turn me off from the story.

Plot and Characters[21/30]: Your plot mixed perfectly with your characters. Your chapters and characters were okay, not the best they could have been. Having an 18 year old girl with cancer in your story makes it much more interesting than some perfect Mary-Sue who is loved by everyone. G-Dragon, well anyone in the K-Pop industry period, being thug-like is something seen too often from AFF authors. Your story may come off as a cliche from many people, because it slightly is. But your twist to the idea is one of the best I've seen, and boy have I seen alot.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Word Chose[18/25]: The format of your chapters doesn't please me. From every fanfic, story, book, etc. I expect decent chapters. That it's the case with AFF authors also. It would be better to make actual chapters from what you have written. Your chapters are perfectly fine except for their formatting. I suggest going back to read each and every one of your chapters,  just to be safe. Your grammar, spelling, punctuation, and word chose can be improved slightly, but it was acceptable.

Flow[9/10]: Your flow was alright.

Overall Enjoyment[4/15]: Honestly and truthful, I really didn't like your story, the idea of thug X cancer patient isn't my cup of tea. Don't let my review discourage you! Just look at how many comments and suscribers you have! That means they love your story.

Grade: 62% 

I think I was alittle too harsh here.... Oops! And I reviewed it alittle too late. Reviewed By: cottonSHINeecandy