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Username: Tychee formerly known as KangSangMun
Position[s]: Shop Owner, Reviewer, Consultor
Status: Semi-Available
Preferred Genre: All
Preferred story type: Chaptered and one shot.

About me:

Well I’m a lover of words, that being the case I love reading and writing. I’ve been writing for over eight years, but I’m still not on the level I’d like to be as yet. I started this shop because i'd like to help others develop their stories and realize their potential. Also, this has always been a dream of mine ever since I joined AFF. If you select me as a Reviewer, please note that I can be a bit too honest and critical at times so your review may be rather long depending on the corrections needed.

 

Username: Vronvron
Position[s]: Shop Manager, Reviewer
Status: Available
Preferred Genre: Romance, Fluff, Romcom, Supernatural, Fantasy, (light or heavy). Slight Angst, but not too much. I do not read Sad/Tragedy.
Preferred story type: Chaptered and one shot.

About me:

I have been on AFF for a bit over 2 years now, but have been writing for longer than that. I have several fanfics on my own and seeing as that I can see how I've improved over my time here, I hope I will be able to help you guys too! I am quite new to reviewing and hope that I can learn from this experience as well!

 

 

Username: Sonnet_sartori
Position[s]: Reviewer, Consultor
Status: Unavailable
Preferred Genre: fluff, angst, horror, , slice-of-life, pwp, romance, , yuri, het, basically anything under the sun. 
Preferred story type: one-shots, chaptered stories under 30 chapters.

About me:

hey there ~ I'm Sonnet, and I go by Sonny. I've been writing for almost five years now, but on AFF it's been less than six months. I have an eye for plotholes, grammatical errors and poor character development so if you feel insecure in those areas, I will do my best to help you out. I'm honest, but not mean, so rest assured I will give you my criticism in the gentlest way possible ^^

 

Username: Baconandeggyeol6104
Position[s]: Reviewer, Consultor
Status: Unavailable

Preferred Genre: - Weaknesses: Sci-fi, Fantasy (except vampire and wolf au), Horror and Thriller.Other than that I am good with anything but my strength is , hetero or not.
Preferred story type: - One-shot and Chaptered

About me:

Hey! You can call me Jus, a Chanbaek hardcore shipper. Park Chanyeol is my bias and i've been reviewing for the past 2 months. This is a win-win situation for me, helping you beautify your story and i get to improve my english vocabulary. I can be a straightforward reviewer at times because it'll help you improve a lot. 

 

 

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++sujuELFsarang your review will be ready by tomorrow i'm sorry for the late review ++
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TurbulenceTenshi #1
Chapter 46: Oh, hey, "Want and Resent"'s back up... if anyone's interested! Thanks either way :)
sujuELFsarang #2
Chapter 45: Finally! I was actually waiting after the day you announced that it will be posted. Anyway, I'm happy for your review.

I know it is something not all people will waste time reading. It's cliche. Over used plot. Nothing really special just some typical drama. XD. No one would actually repeat reading stories that is already predictable. What am I saying? Lol. I am not really aiming for readers when I first wrote this. This is actually a gift for a friend because she really really love Baekhyun and she was the one who told me to post it here and ask for a review. But, when people started noticing it, I was like "I have to at least tell them what happened after. They deserve it" and yes, I know I will give them a sequel that is not really something to go back XD Lol.

Regarding the title, I would really really like to change it but my friend already read this and she doesn't want me to change what was done. She's kind of childish and selfish C:

Thank you for correcting my errors. I know there are lots of it and I do need someone who can point it out for me because I can't do it for myself. (disadvantage of not having English as the mother language) Thank you and sorry I wasn't able to meet your satisfaction :( .

Thank you Tychee! C: Gonna credit after this.
shadowjjong #3
Chapter 43: I have read my review and will credit as soon as possible, I am a bit under studying pressure, so it may take a while. Thank you very much again.
redocean- #4
(c) for the side story of this oneshot (it's going to focus more on the past of Kai and Krystal), because I feel like I was too focused on trying to make this unbreakable bond between the two of them that I forgot to explain more about their past. So, there will be answers to your questions on the side story, I'll probably request a review for it once I posted it!

Whoa, I didn't realise I made that typo. I'll fix it right away, thank you so much!

Once again, thank you so much for reviewing and reading this story. I'm very honoured that you like it overall, I'm really glad that you had a good read and the time I spent brainstorming the plot and characterisation didn't go to waste. I will certainly comeback to this shop to get another review from you. I've also credited your shop in my foreword and upvoted this thread. Thank you so much, have a nice day <3
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