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Author: MinnieCrafts

Story title: 100% Tangible or 100% Invisible?

Story type: Chaptered

Reviewer: vronvron

Review completion: 3/4/2016

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Overall Story rating: 10/10 

Title: [10/10]

The title definitely makes the readers curious and want to know more about what the story will be about. It's unique and kinda quirky so I don't need to say much here.

Foreword/Description: [9/10]

Your descriptio definitely makes the readers want to continue reading. But also, the wayyou also introduce a few characters to us, and the fact that Jungkook's character is relatable to a large number of people, it really catches the attention of the readers.

Plot/ character development:[10/10]

I must say that the character development is done at a good pace, and we can see how Jungkook is opening up just a bit mre, even with his unfortunate past. As for the plot, I think that it's actually being written at a great pace, not too fast or slow, yet at the same time, you're relieving the present with some flashbacks of the past.

Characterization: [9/10]

The overall characterisation of the main characters, but also their friends is really well executed. I found it amazing and definitely in need of being commended for somehow intertwining all of their relationships. The characters themselves are all very lovely to read about and their interactions with one another keep the story going, with newly discovered interactions each time.

Grammar/Syntax:[10/10]

I don't have much to say here since it was pretty much all clean, other than a few minor typos here and there which could be easily overlooked.

Vocabulary: [9/10]

Your vocab is also well suited to the genre but also the overall feel of the story. Again, I don't have much to say here since it was easy to read and I didn't have to stop and think about anything twice, nor was I confused about anything you wrote.

Setting/Description: [8/10]

The setting is a little cliche, but it matches the characters and their current situations. Considering the context of the story, the library, cafe, etc. are all very relevant.

/Conclusion:[10/10]

As the story is not yet finished, and I have read what you have written so far, I believe that the /conclusion will be great! I have pretty high expectations for this story! (No pressure though ^^")

Enjoyment:[10/10]

Overall, I enjoyed the story so far immensely and plan on following it! I am really quite curious about what will happen to the three!

Total: 85/90

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