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Author:Taenyz
Story Title: Curtain Call of our Flowers
Story Type: One Shot
Reviewer: toxicxiukiss
Overall Rating: 
Story Link: Click Here

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Title: 10/10    

I'm was quite impressed with the title, it for sure is a unique one and deserves a few points in originality. The theme is really common so normally I'd run away, however, it was the title that drew me in. It's for sure unique. Actually first looking at it I was hoping for a longer story, the length to me didn't feel like a one-shot type of story. I don't think it gives much away, I mean with the way you've written it the title has put the sort of feel into it

Foreword/Description:  9.5/10

For a one-shot it doesn't give too much away, you added just right information. Could maybe be a bit smaller, in the size of information. I mean it's good however for a one-shot normally its just one liner or two liners. That way it will drag and draw the reader in more and more. Being a non-yuri reader, it was enough to actually to get me reading it. 

Plot: 8/10

Ok, I was a little worried since the theme is so common. However the plot, wow! It's really good. I can tell by reading the story that you've spent a while writing it, so it's perfect. I've read it a few times, I notice that the start of the story you've written it a little fast/ I think you may have relaxed a little more within the middle of the work. I'd like to see more work from you, I mean it's a good pace for one shot. I mean maybe you have better pace for chaptered stories?

Characterization: 10/10

As for this part, I notice that you had written out quite a few characters. I was worried. However when reading your story, I was happy to see that you didn't leave any out. Or forget about any of the characters, you even gave us a bit of information of Sooyeon's character which surprised me when I read it. Overall the actual relationship of taeny was a good one. I don't normally read Yuri stories so it strange for me to like the characters. However they were all written so well and I couldn't help but like the story. You wrote it like a real story so it made it feel more realistic. 

Grammar/Syntax: 10/10

Only a few grammatical errors, nothing to lose any sleep about. Trust me it won't affect the readers enjoyment, anyway, it didn't affect mine.

Vocabulary: 10/10

I loved the words you wrote, I could tell by reading the story that you're an experienced author. It actually made the story feel more realistic. Great job in that area! 

Setting/Description: 10/10

After reading the story, I must say you didn't lose focus or go off track. It all followed the through to the end perfectly. As description go, for 2016 best yuri I've seen so far. In terms of plot and layout.

/Conclusion: 9/10

Didn't really leave me with much of the feel. However, at the end of the story, I was hoping for more. I really wanted to see more of the story. 

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

However as the final statement,  I did enjoy the read. I mean for someone who doesn't normally go for Yuri, I might see more of your stories. It was a really nice and enjoyable read. 

Total: 86.5/90

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