Shop Info & Rules

The Sleepless Phoenix Review & Consulting Shop [CLOSED]

WELCOME TO  

      

The shop was established on December 31st 2015 by shop owner,Tychee. 


About:
The Sleepless Phoenix is a review shop which seeks to provide AFF writers with honest and constructive reviews, in order to help writers improve their writng. We also provide consultation, so if you are having a hard time coming up with a story title or plot ideas,we will be able to help you.
Meaning behind the shop name:
The shop is called The Sleepless Phoenix because the reviewers here will work assiduously to get your review[s] done quickly, hence we are sleepless.
As writers you will learn from your mistakes and rise above them to become a better writer, so like the phoenix you will rise from yours ashes (your mistakes) to become something new and improved. 
So the shop title reflects you the writer and us the reviewers,together we will work together to make AFF a better place for not only you but for those who  love to read the stories you write as well. 
Reasons why you should use our services:
Well you're probably wondering why you should request for a review or consultation here, so i'll tell you why:
[1]We are exteremely thorough with our reviews  since our aim is to help you grow as a writer.
[2] We get your review [s] done as quickly as possible.
[3]We aim to provide you with the best service possible.

                 

   Rules 

[1] In order to request for a review/consultation, please subscribe to the shop,this is a given.
[2] Do not be rude or rush reviewers,we will try to review your story as quickly as possible.
[3] Be sure to credit the shop (Use the shop's banner) in your story after you've picked up your review.IT SHOULD BE NOTICEABLE 
[4] To send in a request application for a story review, consultation or hiring please comment below using the form outline.
[5] We only review current stories,simply put; we DO NOT review stories which are on Hiatus.  
[6] For those requesting consultation, it will be done privately. The selected reviewer will message you and things will proceed from there.If you do not reply to the message within a 24 hour time frame your request for consultation will be nullified. Please note that if a reviewer provides you with an original plot idea, you are expected to credit them in the story. (Along with the shop)   
[7] If you have any problems with the review you were given, please message the reviewer who handled your work directly. DO NOT call them out publicly or bash them.
[8]If you do not collect your review within 1 week, your review will be taken down. 
[9] Please fill out the request/consultation form correctly, or you will not be provied with the requested service.
[10] You are only permitted to request review for two stories at a time.
[11] Please note that if your story surpasses 10 chapters, only the first 10 will be read. Additional chapters will only be read if the reviewer wishes to continue. (This is done so that we can facilitate  as many persons as possible)
[12]You are expected to comment  or upvote after you've collected your review[s]
[13] Please select your desired reviewer.
[14] Lastly, anyone who fails to comply with the shop rules will be banned immediately. 
Signed management.
   

 

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Tychee
++sujuELFsarang your review will be ready by tomorrow i'm sorry for the late review ++

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TurbulenceTenshi #1
Chapter 46: Oh, hey, "Want and Resent"'s back up... if anyone's interested! Thanks either way :)
sujuELFsarang
#2
Chapter 45: Finally! I was actually waiting after the day you announced that it will be posted. Anyway, I'm happy for your review.

I know it is something not all people will waste time reading. It's cliche. Over used plot. Nothing really special just some typical drama. XD. No one would actually repeat reading stories that is already predictable. What am I saying? Lol. I am not really aiming for readers when I first wrote this. This is actually a gift for a friend because she really really love Baekhyun and she was the one who told me to post it here and ask for a review. But, when people started noticing it, I was like "I have to at least tell them what happened after. They deserve it" and yes, I know I will give them a sequel that is not really something to go back XD Lol.

Regarding the title, I would really really like to change it but my friend already read this and she doesn't want me to change what was done. She's kind of childish and selfish C:

Thank you for correcting my errors. I know there are lots of it and I do need someone who can point it out for me because I can't do it for myself. (disadvantage of not having English as the mother language) Thank you and sorry I wasn't able to meet your satisfaction :( .

Thank you Tychee! C: Gonna credit after this.
shadowjjong #3
Chapter 43: I have read my review and will credit as soon as possible, I am a bit under studying pressure, so it may take a while. Thank you very much again.
redocean-
#4
(c) for the side story of this oneshot (it's going to focus more on the past of Kai and Krystal), because I feel like I was too focused on trying to make this unbreakable bond between the two of them that I forgot to explain more about their past. So, there will be answers to your questions on the side story, I'll probably request a review for it once I posted it!

Whoa, I didn't realise I made that typo. I'll fix it right away, thank you so much!

Once again, thank you so much for reviewing and reading this story. I'm very honoured that you like it overall, I'm really glad that you had a good read and the time I spent brainstorming the plot and characterisation didn't go to waste. I will certainly comeback to this shop to get another review from you. I've also credited your shop in my foreword and upvoted this thread. Thank you so much, have a nice day <3