Be careful (of who you mess with)

Description

It’s a story about a girl. A lone spoiled one at that. Not physically but mentally. Sometimes parents love their children too much, to the point the child couldn’t understand from right to wrong. Now that doesn’t mean the parents have nothing to do and don’t know how to raise their children, it’s just… when a parent see their kids struggling in their life; they just couldn’t sit back and watch them getting hurt over and over.

That was their dear daughter, Park Jiyeon.

While some parents are overly lovely that doesn’t mean every parent out there are like this. Nope. Even a toddler could tell that much.

Not everyone is blessed with such a kind parents. Some are even left behind by their parents. While some... they just lost it.

Jiyeon was the spoiled rotten girl.

Sehun was left behind.

Luhan lost them.

That was all about it. Now how they grow up is what you might find here. How ones surrounding could affect them. But still the end decision has always end up in their hands as how they chose to live so they are the ones who’ll face their consequences; not their parents.





Sehun

Oh Sehun
Science teacher
22 years old

Jiyeon

Park Jiyeon
Student
19 years old

Luhan

Xi Luhan
Detective
23 years old

Foreword

“Mr Oh, you know i can make you jobless in a few seconds if i want.”

“Please i’m telling you to stop this before i loose my temper. I’m telling you won’t like to see me angry...”

“You never learn Mr Oh, do you? Afterall you’re just a young teacher who don’t have any experience how does this world work.”

“Trust me, no one knows this fact better then me, little girl.”


 


Title: Be Careful (Of who you mess with)

Genre: action, dark, murder

Warning: This isn’t ordinary high school story. It has some violence scenes, bad language, might include mature stuff, but i’ll inform it in the beginning of the chapter why its rated m.

Length: Chaptered.

-Don’t plagiarize, any similarities are coincidence. Its a pure fiction and nothing in this fic is real. Enjoy.



So new story, idea has been in mind for a week now and i really wanted to write it now. Well i choose Sehun to be main because he seems perfect for this role in this story and beside he look more evil then arrogant Jiyeon so this role fit every inch of his body and his personality :)

 

 


Poster credits: Lucybabie



Poster shop credits : We Got Fired ---// GRAPHIC SHOP

Designer : shin-oppa




Designer : ryhanna




All right reserved to Bleak_night.

 

 

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kakito94
#1
wah finally....thanks for publish this story again author-nim:)
Pjykmy
#2
Chapter 43: Its already the end. So jiyeon has decided to run away with sehun. Its so sad how all of them so miserable and in mess. I feel sorry for sehun and as i thought only jiyeon can help sehun. It a wonderful story. I hope there would be a bonus chapter or what ever. Maybe about sehun dream to build a family with jiyeon. . Anyway thank you for a great story. Looking foward to your new story ^^
kakito94
#3
Chapter 43: Huaaaa!!already end??i'm crying...i'm glad they got together in the end even need to run like that..we know jiyeon is the only one medicine for sehun...so,just jiyeon can cure sehun from this mentally illness....but i hope there oneshot sequel for this story..please!!..hehe...i love this story so much n i will miss this story too...anyway,tq for this great story author-nim...you did so well..i never regret waiting n reading this story in this two years...the storyline also great...love you author-nim!!!!about one-shoot i love the hepy ending one..but why sehun n kai have a sad ending:((i can't endure sad ending...i like both of them...but it's ok..please kept writing author-nim n fighting.^_^
Pjykmy
#4
Chapter 42: So jiyeon and luhan might found their freedom but then somehow it didn't feel right.well minseok must had enough. He had to take care of everything even it is sehun's fault. But he cant just accused jiyeon for that I really hope that they both will be together and build their own family thanks for new update. So sad that next chapter will be the last one but then i will wait for it. Goodluck authornim
kakito94
#5
Chapter 42: Wow,i thought it's everything going to fine...when already it's clear then,their bcome the victims..i'm sad to see jiyeon n sehun going to separated like that...even i'm happy that luhan n jiyeon already got a freedom n not going to be chase again..but i'm sad for sehun...he even dream want to build his own family with jiyeon....huaaa,i want to cry when i think about that...even there a very small chance to see that happen but i still hope for that...wah,can't believe the next chapter is going to be the last ep....can't wait!!!tq author-nim..love ya^^
kakito94
#6
Chapter 41: Why so suddenly i'm feel insecure???last beautiful moment???don't make me cry a river author-nim...in one side i'm happy to see that their sweet moment but in one side i'm feeling sad..i don't know why..i'm feel like something bad is gonna happen....even their talking session at the beach feel so broken heart...how much i want to see their hepy ending together but i know it seem impossible right now...like sehun said,their life is threatened..huaaa,i'm feel like crying right now...but finally,we can see the gentleman sehun n his hepy face that we can't see in the past..i'm love it...can't wait to know what will happen in next chapter...see the reaction that luhan's auntie,i bet she don't know that her husband bad action in the past...tq author-nim for fast update...even i'm feel sad it's going to be end soon...fighting for next update ne!!!!^^
kevinluvizzah
#7
Chapter 41: Please dun make sehun die like luhan die in your previous story "The Weird love story " . Im quite upset last time you make the main die . Huhuhuhu . Sorry if this comment too offensive
Pjykmy
#8
Chapter 41: So finally jiyeon give him everything. Its kinda sweet with their non stop arguing over aomething. I really hope there will be happy ending for all of them especially for sehun and jiyeon. Its really sad to know that it almost the end . And again i hope they got happy ending. Thanks for fast update. Keep updating. Can't wait for more
kevinluvizzah
#9
Chapter 41: What do you mean by last one of full beautiful moments . Please i beg you dont make sehun or jiyeon die . Huhuhuh T.T like seriously
kakito94
#10
Chapter 40: Wow,i'm so happy to see your update author-nim...poor luhan..so sad to know how his family got ruin by his own uncle just bcoz of money...luho such a bad person...he should get the punishment...chanyeol reaction is so funny when sehun want to bring him along..haha...n like always sehun n jiyeon will bickering each other n end up with lovely moment..i like it so much..keke...aishh,that evil yunho still run over them..lucky enough sehun n kai can escape from him after bloody fighting....poor sehun,his handsome face got a new scar again..haha..i hope they can find that guy name luho...tq author-nim for fast update..you don't know how happy i am when i see the notification..hehe...can't wait for next update..fighting author-nim!!!!!!