Story Title : 3/5

The title 'A not so nice boyfriend' is commonly used by authors. I suggest a more catch one.  But aside form that it is eye catching. Simple yet it is meaningful and you could get the plot of the story by just reading the title.

Graphics : 8/10

You have a simple poster, but it would do. Just like what they say, Simple is the best ! But I prefer the characters to have a color. Because when you make it just black and white, it is somehow boring. BUT !! It is beautiful in its own way ^^

Description/Foreword: 8/10

It is quite messy try putting them close and please don't put too much spaces between the paragraphs. It really is confusing but anyways, I like your description, you just have some grammatical errors. I am proud that you explained your story in the foreword but please make the letters a bit ore smaller ^^

Plot : 29/30

At first, I was messed up because Luhan seems to be a sweet boyfriend but as I read the story, I slowly understood why you called him the not so nice boyfriend. and it is because he like to tease Jiyeon . And Jiyeon is afraid of animals ! We're disame XD I enjoyed reading the story ^^

Characterization: 15/15

I have no complains and I like how you casted them in your story. Luhan being a creepy and torturing boyfirend but is sweet. Jiyeon being a sensitive one. Just love it ~ 

Writing style & Grammar : 18/20

Your writing style is neat and I like it but you're not writing a poem right ? Anyways, I really like it. You have some grammatical errors for some of your chapters. So I suggest a beta reader. I could be your beta reader if you want.

Personal enjoyment : 10/10

I love how you wrote the story to be honest, I've been looking for a story like this ! Keep writing good stories. Okay ?

Total : 91/100 Great JOB !!

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: I enjoyed the story and I am happy the you choose me to review it ^^ I am so happy that you asked a review from our shop ^^ Please come back again !! I suggest you to have a  beta reader ^^ Thanks again
REVIEWED ON: 25/04/15