Story Title : 5/5

I have gained interest when I've read the title. It isn't everyday that you hear that title ^^ I am happy that you made your original one and it really fits the story.

Graphic : 9/10

It was nice and simple and GOD!! Suga is so handsome in your poster ~ I love it however, there is too much  black and white. It is life less but it really really REALLY depicts the story.

Description/Foreword : 8/10

The description told some things in your story but the foreword is so confusing that it makes me think if I have missed one part but I didn't. Try organizing it into a more understandable one.

Plot : 27/30

Just like the Foreword, it is also confusing.  But what makes me wonder is, Is Suga and V an Angel? Well you described Suga with a halo and Angels do have halo, right? Oh and I like how you wrote the story it is well paced and enjoyable to read.

Characterization : 13/15

I don't have a clue on who is who but Suga and Yoongi are different just like V and Taehyun, right? And the you, that you're saying or the reader in the story is Jangmi, right? Sorry if I am asking to much questions XD well next time please do introduce your characters to help your readers know how they should act in the story.

Writing style & Grammar : 18/20

I like your writing style it is elegant and it is easy to read however, you have some grammar mistakes and wrong spelling. 

Foreword.

Original :Hormonies

Revised : Harmonies

I suggest you to have a beta reader. She would help you with your grammar and spelling.

Personal enjoyment : 9/10

The story was confusing but has tons of parts where you could get goosebumps ^^ I love reading it and I would stay subscribed to it and so that it would be easy for me to find it whenever I feel like reading ~

Total : 89/100 Almost 90!! Great Job !!

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: Hello !! I hope this helped and sorry for being to late -_- and yeah. I know that I am not the reviewer you picked but I already did it since the reviewer you picked is busy and can't review your story. I suggest you to have a beta reader. This shop is offering a beta reader if you want just PM me ^^ please keep on making great stories ~
REVIEWED ON: 04/05/15