Story Title : 3/5

Your title is very common but eye catching. To be honest, I have seen stories with the same title like for example : Be my valentine, Please be my boyfriend, etc.

But anyways the title fits the story well.

Graphics : 8/10

It is cute and I like looking at it but the 'do you want to be my' part is hard to see I suggest to take a little bit dark color. Also the qoute is hard to read.

Description/Foreword : 8/10

You don't have a proper description but you did wrote the Title and the a qoute which explained the story a bit. I suggest that you explain your plot next time.

Plot : 29/30

The plot was sooo cute~ That i haven't ate lunch yet because I was so engrosed with reading your fic ^^ But as I said before, the story isn't original. There are still some stories with the same concept as yours. And what's more important is that it is well paced.

Characterization : 14/15

You didn't introduced your characters. Maybe you showed their pictures but not their role in the story. You better explain how they would act in the story but I think they're acting as it is (?)
Well next time. Explain their characteristics, okay?

Writing Style & Grammar : 20/20

You write so neat. I like the idea where you used a layout to make your story presentable and less boring to look at or read. I hardly saw any wrong grammar and wrong spelling.

Personal enjoyment: 10/10

I enjoyed reading your story and I've been looking for and awesome story like that ^^ and BTW, Jimin is my favourite in Bangtan boys. The story is so cute and sweet. It is also well paced. 

Total : 92/100 Good Job!!

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: Hello !! Sorry for the delay and sorry if I am the one who did your review. Your reviewer is busy for awhile and can't do it. I hope your satisfied with your review. I really am happy that you picked our shop. Please do come and request from us again. I suggest you too have a much more clear graphic and to introduce your character's role and how they would be acting in the story.
REVIEWED ON: 04/05/15