TheFourLeafClover

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REVIEWER: ROSE_17



 

 

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Story Title : 5/5

I have no complains about your story title. In fact it is simple yet gives you an information about the story. I like it not much stories have the same title as your story.

Graphics : 10/10

Your graphic is so cute.  Yes it is not that light but it matched very well in the story's genre. And you know Chanyeol and Baekhyun's picture is so cute that while reviewing this, I can't stop looking at it.

Description/Foreword : 10/10

Again WOW !! Your description is nice. I can't find anything wrong with it and it gives information about your fic. I could actually relate with it.

Plot : 26/30

To be honest, I've already read tons of stories about psychology but you succeeded in putting the plot twist when the Chanyeol, the psychiatrist also has a disorder. Oh !! and one more thing in the Part one of your story I got confused when they're at a court. I suggest you have a prologue to show the story background.

Characterization : 14/15

To be honest. I was actually shocked when I saw that Chanyeol also has a disorder but I like how you casted and wrote the characters.

Writing style and grammar : 18/20

I have no complains about your writing style but you have slight mistakes in your grammar.

For Example :

Original : I'm not bipolar !!

Revise : I do not have bipolar disorder !!

Well in my opinion I would prefer it ^.^

Personal Enjoyment : 8/10

I like the story though I got lost on the first chapter but I still enjoyed reading it and actually I am happy that there are other EXO members and that Onew is there XD

 

Total : 91/100   Great Job !!!


COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: I really suggest you to have a prologue but anyways nice story ^.^ thank you for choosing our shop !! You are welcome to request again and again ^.^
REVIEWED ON: 28/03/15

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kalon_sama #1
Frick I forgot to comment after I requested //realizes like a month later
Omg kill me I'm so sorry
Pingdwae
#2
Hello! i'm back again and i've made another request for review :)
blacksmile
#3
I've sent a request XD
sleepybeans
#4
Hi! I've requested! ^_^
kalon_sama #5
Chapter 39: Sorry for the late pick-up! I just recently got stable internet ;A;
But yes thank you for this review~ I didn't think you were that harsh, it's understandable since you like BTS as well. The title I thought would get a lower score, to be honest xD because I thought that that's how the song title was written; with a 'U' instead of 'You.' (I don't know anymore OTL. I'll change the graphics to match the background, and I see where you're coming from with how vague my foreword is, but meh. I personally like vague forewords so sorry~ And thank you for your comment in the plot section! I was actually lazing around nit-picking at some lines when I got the idea actually hehe. The main character wasn't supposed to be clear as I didn't want to use names and label anyone, but it could be any BTS member you'd want I guess~
Thank you for reviewing my story once again. I'll definitely come back!
AlisCookieMonster
#6
Chapter 43: BTW, I'll follow what you suggested and add line dividers! Thanks for the suggestion, never really thought of doing it until now~
AlisCookieMonster
#7
Chapter 43: Just saw the review! I totally wasn't expecting that, but thank you for reviewing my one shot, and I will credit you guys ASAP. :3
libianno
#8
Chapter 41: Thank you sooo very much for the review on Chasing Pavements. I truly appreciate your efforts in reviewing it for me. I will credit you as soon as I put up my last chapt.
Thank you :D
Pingdwae
#9
Ah i'm sorry but i'm cancelling my request :( mianhe.
blissfulcoconuts
#10
Chapter 42: I do use microsoft word before I update. I always wright on it and sure I would put pics and such in the upcoming chapters and i'll start putting borders