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Story Title : 5/5
I have no complains about your story title. In fact it is simple yet gives you an information about the story. I like it not much stories have the same title as your story.
Graphics : 10/10
Your graphic is so cute. Yes it is not that light but it matched very well in the story's genre. And you know Chanyeol and Baekhyun's picture is so cute that while reviewing this, I can't stop looking at it.
Description/Foreword : 10/10
Again WOW !! Your description is nice. I can't find anything wrong with it and it gives information about your fic. I could actually relate with it.
Plot : 26/30
To be honest, I've already read tons of stories about psychology but you succeeded in putting the plot twist when the Chanyeol, the psychiatrist also has a disorder. Oh !! and one more thing in the Part one of your story I got confused when they're at a court. I suggest you have a prologue to show the story background.
Characterization : 14/15
To be honest. I was actually shocked when I saw that Chanyeol also has a disorder but I like how you casted and wrote the characters.
Writing style and grammar : 18/20
I have no complains about your writing style but you have slight mistakes in your grammar.
For Example :
Original : I'm not bipolar !!
Revise : I do not have bipolar disorder !!
Well in my opinion I would prefer it ^.^
Personal Enjoyment : 8/10
I like the story though I got lost on the first chapter but I still enjoyed reading it and actually I am happy that there are other EXO members and that Onew is there XD
Total : 91/100 Great Job !!!
COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: I really suggest you to have a prologue but anyways nice story ^.^ thank you for choosing our shop !! You are welcome to request again and again ^.^
REVIEWED ON: 28/03/15
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