Story Title : 4/5

The title isn't much heard but there are stories with the same concept as you are doing like 'My Facebook Boyfriend', 'Lovers in Paris', etc. Like those stories but I really am loving the title!!

Graphics : 10/10

I really love the graphic. It is simple yet so cute!! I can't stop looking at it and admiring how cute the poster is. It really fits with your story and the quote is cute as well ^^ Not to mention the background!! It was cute as well!! All that I could say is that your poster and Background is so cute~

Description : 9/10

The Description showed everything but it also is a nice synopsis for your story!! It was short but at the same time it gives information about your story.

Plot : 28/30

Your story is nice. It is not always that you see nice one-shots like that XD but I really enjoyed the story especially that I like Jungkook. It is well paced, it doesn't go too fast or too slow. The plot was actually cute and I was so concentrated on the story that I was about to cry when you placed the twist where they will separate but it was nice!! Speechless *___*

Writing Style and Grammar : 17/20

Your writing style is neat but I really prefer having line dividers to make it less boring to read. Probably I always say this because whenever I read a story that goes on without any designs, I become bored of the story and won't read it but luckily, the plot was interesting so yeah. 

Grammar is good but you have some wrong grammars but it isn't that big that you can't fix it. I like it how you explained the meaning of some Korean words you included ^^

Characterization : 12/15

Characters...I guess its okay. I can't review on this since you didn't explain how the characters shouls act here so I really don't know. I suggest to you that you explain them next time~

Personal Enjoyment : 10/10

The story was the one that I've been looking for. It is sweet and I like the twist to it ^^ That is all I could saw hehe but really Good luck with the story, it really is worth reading.

Total Score : 90/100  Great Job!!

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: Wonderful story author-nim!! I really loved it and so did your other subscribers ^^ Keep writing good stories author-nim~ I really suggest you to explain your characters next time and also put some decorations on your story like line dividers ^^ Thanks for requesting from us and we hope to see your next request~ Sorry for the late update was a little lazy to update XD Thanks again!!
REVIEWED ON: 05/06/15