Story Title : 3/5

The title is okay but lots of stories have the same title as yours but anyways the story title showed that it is a sweet story that makes readers want to know about it more.

Graphics : 8/10

The Poster is cute and all but there is something wrong in it. In the poster it says "Your cakes is delicious and I likes it" but it should be " Your Cakes are delicious and I like you !" you don't write is if it's plural and you don't write Likes if it's singular.

Description/Foreword: 5/10

The Description shows information about your story, yet again, you have grammatical errors

Original : Tao is popular boy in Exo high while you popular in Exo middle high. One day you meet him in your mom's cafe that you work, he told you that he likes you ..... Strawberry Shortcake ?!.

Revise : Tao is the popular boy in Exo high while you're popular in Exo middle high. One day, you met him in your mother's cafe, where you work. He told you that he likes your .... Strawberry Shortcake ?!.

You have to fix your description or else your story won't gain votes or subscribers.

plot : 22/30

The plot was quite cliche, to be honest I've seen tons of story with the same plot as yours and it was hard for me to read it because of your grammatical errors. 

For Example in Chapter 1 

Original : "She so beautiful"

Revise : "She is so beautiful"

Characterisation : 15/15

The characters are okay, they depict to what you wrote in your story description and thumbs up for that.

Writing Style & Grammar : 10/20

Your writing style is really neat however, your grammar still has to be improved. I suggest that you hire a beta-reader to prevent making the same mistakes.

Personal Enjoyment : 4/10

Your story is a bit hard to understand and to be honest I didn't get the feeling of getting excited through reading the story.

Total : 67/100 It's okay you still passed !! 

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS:

Sorry if I'm getting into your nerves but you really have to improve your grammar by hiring a Beta-reader. Anyways thank you for picking our shop, don't be shy to aske from us again.
REVIEWED ON: 28/2/15