Story Title: 5/5

From the first time I saw your story title it already cathed my eye. The title was nice and It depicted Jongin in the story.

Graphics : 10/10

The poster is simple yet it is nice, from the story you told us that Kai is White and D.O. is black and that reflects on the poster.

Description/Foreword : 8/10

The description is nice and it explains the story. But the word essential isn't supposed to be repeated again and again try using some other words instead of putting essential again and again.

Plot: 28/30

To be honest, I've already read tons of story about suicides and drugs, and I don't like the Idea of using so much harsh words, maybe for me because I'm still young.

Characterization: 15/15

The Characters are blending well with the story your writing and It is nice, I have no complains about it.

Writing Style & Grammar : 19/20

Your grammar is good I could actually understand it, you don't have any spelling errors. But for your writing style It confuses me a bit.

Personal Enjoyment : 7/10

To be honest I enjoyed reading your story but it confuses me a bit because I still don't have that much ideas about drugs, probably because I'm just 13, but anyways It was a nice story.

Total : 92/100 Congrats !!!

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: 

I enjoyed the story and thank you for picking our shop.

REVIEWED ON: 25/2/15