Story Title : 5/5

The title is nice actually, It gives us a hint that the story would be sweet and cute and It is sweet and cute. Two thumbs up for that.

Graphics :8/10

The Graphic was okay. At least you have a graphic and Graphics are one thing that attracts readers but your graphic was a bit boring. I suggest you put some colors not only in the title but also in the picture.

Description/Foreword : 7/10

Original :This is story about Yoona and Yuri who expecting their first baby.

its Drama...baby,...drama...and drama.

Revised : This is a Story about Yoona and Yuri, who is expecting their first baby.

That alone would be a great description dont add 'its Drama...baby,...drama...and drama.

Plot : 28/30

The Plot was AWESOME !!, I have never seen anything like that it actually blew my mind but some have wrong grammars so I have to read it again and again to understand it but anyways NICE ONE !!!

Characterization : 14/15

The characters in the story reflects how they should be but there is just one problem when you use 'her wife'  it confuses me because they're both girls but its still nice.

Writing style and Grammar : 15/20

Well your writing style is very neat and its not too messy. It helps me to understand the story without getting confused but you grammar is the problem. You have many errors in your grammar. I suggest you hire a beta reader to help you with your grammars.

Personal Enjoyment: 9/10

I enjoyed reading the story and It was awesome. I have never read a story like that and the baby's name was so cute. however, your grammar was the only thing that made me confused. As I say, I have to read it twice or thrice to get what you mean.

Total : 86/100 Great !!

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: I liked your story and I wish I could write awesome stories like your's and Thank you for picking our shop. I suggest you hire a beta reader to help you with your grammar.
REVIEWED ON: 4/3/15