Story Title : 5/5

The title is so original that you don't usually hear it or read it as a title. It is a pretty common word but it made your story worth reading!! And you know what, It mesmerized me just when you sent the review request~ Great Job author-nim!!

Graphics : 10/10

It is a simple poster but it really did depict your story's plot. It is dark just like your story and yeah. It really matches it!!

Description/Foreword: 10/10

The description was short but it talks about the story and of course describes it very very VERY Well!!

Plot : 28/30

The plot was awesome!! But there are stories with the same plot as your story like when their body was entered by a bad spirit and such. But I loved reading your story it made me speechless after I read it. I was taken aback when the story ended *cries*

Characterization : 13/15

I don't understand your characters well there is Ares and Helios but who are they in the story? but I do know how they should act in the story ^^

Writing style and Grammar : 18/20

Your writing style and grammar is very neat and I love it. For the grammar, you don't have any mistakes but you do have some missing words to make your sentence okay.

Original : Was the moment eternal sadness fell on him

revised : It was the moment eternal sadness fell on him.

Don't try to cut your sentence because it would just make it wrong.

Personal enjoyment : 10/10

I wasn't that much fan of mystery and such but this was the first time I enjoyed reading that type of story ^^ I was reading it again and again and It kept me awake until 11:00 pm last night XD That was a well written story!!

Total : 94/100  Well done!!

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: Hello !! Sorry that Jawl0820 didn't finish this request she is bust at the moment so she can't review this. Sorry for making you wait for long the shop closed but it opened again ^^ I really love reading your story and it was worth reading. I'll stay subscribe to it~ 
REVIEWED ON: 06/05/15