Coldnewdles
ROS'E Review Shop [Closed]Story Title : 5/5
Your stories title is so interesting. From the title the readers could imagine what kind of story it is, but could still contain curiousity about the story. Which is a good thing ^^
Graphics : 6/10
The graphic is nice and simple but I really prefer your other posters but anyways this would be okay too.
Description/Foreword : 10/10
I like how you wrote the description it really detailed your story and it really fitted the story title. I say its well writted. Good Job author-nim.
Plot : 26/30
The plot was nice but I say there are alot of stories where you have arranged marriage and that the pair is against them getting marriade but you succeed on making your own unique plot.
Characterization : 15/15
You casted the characters very well and I really like how you characterized Jungkook and V in this story. You made V a cold person and it really happened in the story and the Jungkook as a caring friend and it also happened in the story.
Writing style and grammar : 18/20
Your writing style is okay but I suggest you put borders instead of putting tons of spaces and make the writings more bigger perhaps you put 18 or 16. For your grammar, I see no errors. You're actually good at English.
Personal Enjoyment : 9/10
I enjoyed reading the story and I was like 'wait dad, don't turn the wifi off yet.' while reading this cause usually when it strikes 10:00 p.m. my dad would close the wifi. Anyways, good story author-nim and I could also see that your readers really like it ^^
Total : 89/100 almost but Great Job !!
COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: Hello !! sorry for the delay and I wish you don't get mad. I really like your story and I also enjoyed reviewing this fic ^^ Please write more interesting stories ^^ and I wish your fic luck. Thanks for choosing our shop. Please don't hesitate to request from us again ^^
REVIEWED ON: 01/04/15
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