Coldnewdles

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REVIEWER: ROSE_17


 
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Story Title : 5/5

Your stories title is so interesting. From the title the readers could imagine what kind of story it is, but could still contain curiousity about the story. Which is a good thing ^^

Graphics : 6/10

The graphic is nice and simple but I really prefer your other posters but anyways this would be okay too.

Description/Foreword : 10/10

I like how you wrote the description it really detailed your story and it really fitted the story title. I say its well writted. Good Job author-nim.

Plot : 26/30

The plot was nice but I say there are alot of stories where you have arranged marriage and that the pair is against them getting marriade but you succeed on making your own unique plot.

Characterization : 15/15

You casted the characters very well and I really like how you characterized Jungkook and V in this story. You made V a cold person and it really happened in the story and the Jungkook as a caring friend and it also happened in the story.

Writing style and grammar : 18/20

Your writing style is okay but I suggest you put borders instead of putting tons of spaces and make the writings more bigger perhaps you put 18 or 16. For your grammar, I see no errors. You're actually good at English.

Personal Enjoyment : 9/10

I enjoyed reading the story and I was like 'wait dad, don't turn the wifi off yet.' while reading this cause usually when it strikes 10:00 p.m. my dad would close the wifi. Anyways, good story author-nim and I could also see that your readers really like it ^^

 

Total :  89/100   almost but Great Job !!


COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: Hello !! sorry for the delay and I wish you don't get mad. I really like your story and I also enjoyed reviewing this fic ^^ Please write more interesting stories ^^ and I wish your fic luck. Thanks for choosing our shop. Please don't hesitate to request from us again ^^
REVIEWED ON: 01/04/15

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kalon_sama #1
Frick I forgot to comment after I requested //realizes like a month later
Omg kill me I'm so sorry
Pingdwae
#2
Hello! i'm back again and i've made another request for review :)
blacksmile
#3
I've sent a request XD
sleepybeans
#4
Hi! I've requested! ^_^
kalon_sama #5
Chapter 39: Sorry for the late pick-up! I just recently got stable internet ;A;
But yes thank you for this review~ I didn't think you were that harsh, it's understandable since you like BTS as well. The title I thought would get a lower score, to be honest xD because I thought that that's how the song title was written; with a 'U' instead of 'You.' (I don't know anymore OTL. I'll change the graphics to match the background, and I see where you're coming from with how vague my foreword is, but meh. I personally like vague forewords so sorry~ And thank you for your comment in the plot section! I was actually lazing around nit-picking at some lines when I got the idea actually hehe. The main character wasn't supposed to be clear as I didn't want to use names and label anyone, but it could be any BTS member you'd want I guess~
Thank you for reviewing my story once again. I'll definitely come back!
AlisCookieMonster
#6
Chapter 43: BTW, I'll follow what you suggested and add line dividers! Thanks for the suggestion, never really thought of doing it until now~
AlisCookieMonster
#7
Chapter 43: Just saw the review! I totally wasn't expecting that, but thank you for reviewing my one shot, and I will credit you guys ASAP. :3
libianno
#8
Chapter 41: Thank you sooo very much for the review on Chasing Pavements. I truly appreciate your efforts in reviewing it for me. I will credit you as soon as I put up my last chapt.
Thank you :D
Pingdwae
#9
Ah i'm sorry but i'm cancelling my request :( mianhe.
blissfulcoconuts
#10
Chapter 42: I do use microsoft word before I update. I always wright on it and sure I would put pics and such in the upcoming chapters and i'll start putting borders