Yeolwho05
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Story Title : 5/5
I like your title. There are not much stories with that type of title and it shows that the story is made by you without you copying anybody's story title. Thumbs up for that girl ~
Graphics : 6/10
This is also nice but I really prefer your first poster. The first one is more exciting to see and it is not boring. But this one is also nice to see but it is just too dark and I suppose Chanyeol's picture is burned right ?
Description/Foreword : 10 /10
Your description is nice and it doesn't confuse readers like me ^^ And it really shows how nice your plot line is.
Plot : 27/30
I Like your plot but I got `confused when I read Lee Chanyeol and why is he anyways ? oh and for the rated part I couldn't take it probably because I am just 13 and can't hold myself with those types but anyways I like the plot and it shows that the story is originaly your plot line.
Characterization : 12/15
I liked how you casted the characters and how you developed them but I was a bit confused with Lee chanyeol so I suggest you to describe the characters in your description.
Writing Style and Grammar : 20/20
Your Writing style is nice and not confusing. The size is good you used a nice size in your story cause there are some authors who want the sizes so small and you can't even read it easily. For your grammar, Its awesome. I can't find any mistakes. Thumbs up author-nim.
Personal Enjoyment : 9/10
I enjoyed reading the story but as like what I said before I got confused when you inrtoduced Lee Chanyeol I was like 'What ?! I think I missed something' So I reread it again to be sure.
Total : 89/100 Good Job !! Keep up the good work !!
COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS: Hello !! Sorry for the delay I was busy now a days and can't review it earlier and then when I have the time to review it our internet connection is gone so I am so sorry ^^ Any ways I suggest you write the characters that would help us know them more ^^ Thanks again for choosing our shop. You are always welcome to come back and request as much as you want.
REVIEWED ON: 30/03/15
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